Absolutely loved the novel !Great World background and character designConsistent development and updateKindly create a second novel either with a new mc being from other 9 servers or Jack journey in angel island or a new field where all the top rankers of all the servers will compete and strongers NPCs with level limit increased from 99 to 199.
This story started out okay. Then seemed like it could possibly improve. However after the 900's area of the story it is painfully clear there will be no improvement. At around the 900 area the story takes a direct nosedive off a cliff in terms of writing quality and/or story development. Also I have to say this has got to be one of the single Dumbest " Genius" MC's I've ever read about. I can see potential in the authors writing and yet it just seems this potential is thrown away into the trash at every opportunity presented... It's quite a let down.
Thankyou for the update dear author but please give us another chp pleaseeee one more update pleaseeee......
Has potential with some decent twists BUT desperately needs edits and rewrites. Either English is not the author 1st language or it’s badly translated. Some paragraphs are incomprehensible. Has omegaverse elements with some werewolf lore. Author contradicts earlier chapters in later chapters.
omg it was amazing like stfu ......️...️.........
I feel the repeating of lines is quite much tho
just getting to the juicy part
wonderful story.
Ghjvfyhnnvvmjjbbbbgcbnjh
more please
Seriously some of the strongest writing I've seen on here. Warning: Have tissues on hand at all times.
Author… you rock!!! Keep it coming please.