Ok, so, i am at chapter 8 for now, so i can't tell a lot about story development, but it's really well writen, the mc is interesting. Overall it has great potential :)
O my stars! This is such an unexpected gem! And it' complete... awesome work author-San :)Only the world back ground gets a slightly lower rating... but that's understandably cuz of the novel length...
The level of hypocrisy is way too high in this novel...."The only way he would lose all rationality and start a massacre is if someone dared to hurt Lucy, at that time, none would can wish to escape from his grasp as he will mercilessly kill them all" The academy tried to kill not only him BUT ALSO HIS WIFE, LUCY! WHERE IS THE ANGER? Where is the towering killing intent?Not only is he not fucking angry after almost being killed and his wife almost killed but his personality improved?? Mary said "sorry" and he just let her fucking go? What? Someone was a part of the group that had the intention of killing him and Lucy but she is let off because she said sorry.... the stupidity is next level for real. Not only that but Mary even had the audacity to make requests when her life wasn't taken... (not to kill the headmistress). He also went and apologised to the royal family of humanity, but they were the ones to provoke him, not once nor twice but several times but in exchange for that he not only didn't kill a single person but also apologised and gave out weapons and tips to the royal family.... is this even life? Someone spits in your face and you give them an amazing gaming computer???
I really like the novel so far and it seems like i will continue to like it but the author can not for the life of him write. what i mean is there are so many grammer mistakes I would rather go read a random mtl than this no matter how good the story is if you cant read it than its as good as not there
Keep going . I am only on my first chapter but i can feel the writer's imagination . I hope it gets better and better . Will tell people about this novel. All the best
I am not sure what I was expecting from this novel from the description, maybe something like a comparison of human and monster cultures as part of an allegory for modern vs primitive societies. This story was way different then what I expected and I love it!!!The author has some issues with pronouns, but the character development is amazing. It hits that fine line between over exaggerated archetype and stoic realist that so many novels here lean twords. The author has found the happy medium between them.
Random review from the author here mostly to tell readers more of what to expect. This novel is a concept of mine that I wrote when I was starting out as a writer a while back when I wrote mostly to just test things out, but lately, now that I've started to write longer works, I've gotten a creative itch to try to pick this back up.So, without further ado, what to expect from the get go that I feel makes this novel concept a little more unique:System/LitRPG/Evolution-I'll be honest and say I always had a kind of issue with the system genre in that most of the time, many novels have MCs that have a system that seems completely out of place with the established setting which exists solely as a means to make the MC stronger. I wanted to give the 'system' of this novel a more natural feel to it, and as a result, it is simply the evolutionary/upgrading process that the MC, a nonhuman, constantly evolving alien creature much like the zerg from starcraft, uses to consume and evolve with. Which brings me to another point: Non-human MC-I have already written a non-human MC novel on this website, but the more I write it, the more I realize I could have explored the concept a whole lot more instead of having a character that was human at core.Here, the MC is completely inhuman, an alien monster that was bred in a cocoon and meant only to destroy and consume. As a result, it is cold, ruthless, and inhuman in many ways.I do plan on developing this MC's character so that it does not stay the same forever, but I will keep the core of its character as being fundamentally inhuman. It will never, as a result, become human for any extended period of time. That was a long read, but hopefully that was informative. Once again, thanks for reading, and though I hope you as a reader enjoy my writing, I can totally understand if it is not to your liking as well.
This novel has Futanari content in an attempt to genocide the male gender so that the Mc doesn't have to compete with men. This is not very wise and the tag isn't in the Nobel causing extreme backlash cause people have to pay money to find out who would hate.
Looks fun to read. It's nice to see an actual fantasy setting instead of another isekai novel. Keep up the good work, hopefully your novel will get really popular!
This thing is all over the place with a male MC who doesn't know if he is a horny teenage beta male or harem lord deluxe, and a female lead enjoying a side***** lover while raping her master... What the actual ****?
I reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy love the story the chracters are great the world build is good to keep up the good work.
cautiously looking forward to this novel.fjoekendividnkeowosmf,flpeowjd,dcloforkekdkcorokekwldkcmrmek2i9qpdpkfmfmfkeo29jdmcmlspsocmcnvnfjd