interesting preview for the first 7 chapter, but I wish there are more, these are simply too few for complete review so I cannot say much. keep up with the good work ?
Man Channel + Urban + System + Leveling Up + BeautyDespite humble origins, he possesses a natural king's heart. Under the guidance of a system, he continuously battles and levels up, winning the hearts of beauties, and ultimately achieves fulfillment.The bleakness and humiliation of reality are shattered in this book's world, helping you realize one life dream after another.
Dude at least write more chapters than these.I love to see it going. Want morr to read but you don't update.???Please add more chapters and do a mass release.
I really like how the story started. It brought in its own way a unique beginning. The story and the interaction are enjoyable to read and worth trying out.
Really great it itched the itch I was looking for reading just wish it would update more
I must say that I really like your story.I found some parts wrong while translating.I guess it's a translation error on the site.please edit the system and write fast.
Awesome unveiling of a series of events that will overwhelm anyone reading the novel and make you addicted within a few chapters only...and as you read you'll get to see even more though at times just thinking what could be grander than what i've just read?? But there's always better coming up#!!
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Great. I really like his personalities(Cuz he's so EVIL, and that's cool thought.) And the other reason I like Him cuz hes not that hypocrite.:)
A realistic story with heavy themes like bullying, depression, loneliness, insecurity, love, hatred... And just so much more to come... A story like that? You have all of my support - if executed properly.The first 4 chapters are magnificently written, albeit with a few minor errors here and there. The story looks really promising considering the title of the story. It states that the story is inspired by the author's real life. That would allow the author to give a moral message to their readers. I hope they succeed in whatever message they're trying to send.All the best! I'll write more reviews as the story progresses. Also, I really love and hate cliffhangers, really just makes me wanna read all.
This is going great till now. I'm enjoying the story. It is building interest in me now to read further. Sitting in train and reading this in silence is better with a cutting chai. And I'm enjoying it now ?
The MC is going to a fun but not clever pretense kind of feel that slaps everyone in the face be they friend or foe! The other characted get infected by the MC pretensions and leads to good feels all around. The movie bit is apparently "Buried" and was a decent filf with a good profit for its original budget ( $3,000,000 estimate budget for gross profit being $19,152,480). Now Author using his budget that... just read it get good just that the start is a mess and the Author gets better in the future chapter in quality!Author good story hope you have fun writting this!