the writing could use some work, but its not bad
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Love the story keep up the good work confused about chapers 64 & 65 are they previews?
very interesting story love it keep up the good work
Muy buena historia debo decir, pero cuando no se ve al me confiando seguidamente del sistema si no también del mismo, en mi opinión unos de los mejores fics que he leído de este tipo
Interesting story, descriptions on point, grammar on point. Everything is so good and the story is just so good, although I don't really understand the fragments. I have a suspicion thoughGood work, man
Here's a possible review:We met at Wonderla you saved me from drowning in the wave pool thank you so much, and you recommended this story. Honestly, I forgot about it, but something made me go back and start reading...The characters, the plot twists, the fantasy world - everything is so captivating! Akira and Rina's story has me invested, and I love how the mystery unfolds.I've only read up to chapter 3, but I'm binge-reading the rest now! The Shinseiki bloodline, Oni's darkness, and the Hoshizuro Palace intrigue have me curious.
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
The author is doing a good job .And the story is interesting
Definitely a unique story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Will keep reading
very good novel to read and is a new type of novel unlike others
I’ve only just began this book up to ch 37. The world building is very interesting 5/5 and the first chapters are great but the more you read the worst it gets everything seems very forced and the author doent know when to stop the internal monilog and explain the subject form a 3rd person pov. The parents starts off has being very bad parents and neglecting the mc but it seems the author suddenly changes his mind. I do think this story has potential if the author starts fixing his mistakes and stop making everything sounding so forced. Not worth coins but I do think you should read this on a free website.