The City of God (FR)

This was good until the author made the Mc a 'hero' and changed a 90yr old into a completely different person I have no idea why make him live a second life when his previous life has no effect on his new life. what a waste of good material I love Dexter so I got very nostalgic reading about the mc, turns out he literally became a 'Korean villain' that has the alignment of chaotic good. every Korean villain story 'template' is how the mc personality is in his second life.also, this has poison (romance, good-natured Korean citizen, helping the people)

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

I'm still waiting for additional chapters of this nice book, which has a fascinating and original plot. Keep up the excellent work! will advocate for readers

                                                                                                                                                    K

Everything is superb about it... the characters are very likable which is something I like a lot from a book. and the plot is interesting...

Overall pretty good. Writing quality was okay; punctuation could use a little work as well as capitalization. I would mainly use more commas to separate phrases. The author has created a vivid and interesting MC, and the story has a cool premise. Keep writing author! Looking forward to seeing you and the story grow!