SamuelOkunSyU
So far so good. Interesting theme, would be great to see battles that Alexander was famous for in his life. Keep writing and churning out chapters.
A nice and interesting storyline with magical aspects that are perfectly written into the novel. Easy to understandable writing with great chatacter design and story. I do not know what to criticise only the update stability that will hopefully get fixed!
A great novel so far, although there are a few grammar mistakes, they aren't too many and quality-wise is definitely in the upper part of the spectrum.The plot is more deep/important than many other novels that share the same kinda setting. Characters are all but 2-dimensional although their backstory is sometimes explained in a somewhat rushed way.A lot of the world background is in the first additional chapters, which I prefer since this way there are a lot fewer info dumps.
Nice plot l must say .... Author hasn't upload more but still l can say that l is a very interesting story that everyone should try reading...All the best author and plzzz do upload a lot and so that l can read more ??
just binge read the whole thing. I love it and am very excited to read more. the story is smart and entertaining. the characters are well developed and fun to listen to. the story has good pacing from moment to moment, nothing jarring or disconnected. besides a couple grammar or sentence structure problems it's very well written. the world's creation is developed steadily throughout the chapters and I'm excited to learn more about the world in the future. the info dumps are minor and quick to read through which I really appreciate, they provide useful information in the moment and don't bog down the story with long history. I've enjoyed where the story is going so far and am looking forward to where it goes in the future! keep up the amazing work author! I will keep an eye out for new chapters.
The quality of writing is good and neat, but I think it's a bit mediocre. With the addition of more variety of vocabularies, this will be perfect. I love the theme that is unique and different from the usual online novels, so it makes this novel is exciting to read. I'm honestly surprised that it's about alien, thought it will be an usual fantasy genre with magical creatures or something. I gave 4 stars only for world background, because I like more detailed narration on setting. Overall, I love the story, I need to adapt a bit with dirty jokes, but I can handle it. lol!Keep up the good work, Gaasuja! Always love your work!
Normal,not bad a bit cringe thought.
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The current 33 chapters are not enough to make a real review, but as it was a pleasant read so far, I give it 4 stars. I like stories about mc that get stronger by devouring or copying the power of others and this parasitising ability does just that. Therefore I sincerely hope that the story is thought through and won't be dropped midway because the author made the Mc too stupidly op... And maybe more than 2 chapters a week? Pretty please ?
This is good!!!Cool planning!!!Keep it up Author!!!The plot is nice! :)The mc in living in Italy. Nice!!Nice World Background!The gloomy tone of the firsts chapters are good!!The author is a newbie but he’s a challenger. He’s good and comunicates with us.
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