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This novel gets worse and worse as it keeps going, mc doesn't use his brain to think and always make bad decisions. For example, when he had the chance to be the first one to leave starter's village and increase the gap between him and other players, he logged out for a long time and lost a huge portion of his lead.He lost the chance of being the first player who gets a class. We all know that the start of each game is so important and you can't even waste one hour without doing any thing since it is the time when everyone grows fast and can get the most benefits. Also it is the best time to grow so that he will gain more money.Also, mc thinks with his lower body a lot, i mean the first thing that can into his mind when he got money was to hire a beautiful housekeeper? Tf?
Really good FF!Sadly, it's dropped, but still worth to read!MC is an interesting character, not like some we, readers, are used to so I think that everyone should enjoy reading this!
cool story... it;s a long time since i relaxed into a story like this. It's not about the characters or worldbuilding. It's just about the story and a great story at that. The author is an amazing story teller, i got so immersed on those long chapters i lost track of time.
Skip to the chapter 15... the juicy part starts from there if you're not into the slow pacing.Author is super wholesome. Makes everything more welcoming compare to the like of "My Vampire/Warewolf System".
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It is a good book. I recommend readers try it. Till chapter 67, the story so far is good and different from reverse swordmen manhua to which people usually compare it. So give it a try!
It's not entirely the same till now. Concepts of being alone powerful male can be similar but the plot till now is different.
I hope the author regularly updates which the author doesn't till now! I'm looking forward to more chapters.
A decent concept in the story so far, but every time it gets a bit interesting it gets ruined by an annoying thing.
I like the concept of the sword and dual cultivation and his low-key approach to it, but the story and characters are things I dislike. The denseness about making love (seriously?) a servent/low person in the biggest cultivation family doesn't know about it?
How quickly does he fall for the sect girl he meets and ends up explaining everything to her, so much for low-key, then there is the rather stupid girl spirit talking about her husband every other line she has... Why is she even there and this gives all the signs I don't want to see in a dual cultivating novel (another dual cultivating MC. ) His naiveness about everything becomes kinda annoying to show a reason for the spirit girl character to be in the book, she is not needed and only makes the story stale, she also makes MC look stupid and lost. Why should he even trust her and listen to her and what is her role in the story?
What made me stop was that even the next potential lover would be someone who had already enjoyed being with everyone in the town if not the whole country and will always be interested in finding more. I doubt I will like her either, so while there is an interesting concept here, it does not have interesting characters for me.
What I would have been interested in,
1- His devil side
2- Swords and skills about that and his bloodlines powers etc
3- Side character/ lovers who matter to his story (not some other dual cultivations wife and some lady who enjoys being with everyone on town)
4- A more solid character development (now he is portrayed as Naive one second (So some of the irrelevant side characters could have a reason for existing) and partially smart/wise when the side characters are not needed)
5- A much much better reason for the sect girl to like him and accept him being a devil.
6 - etc...
Overall the concept got me interested in the story, but the characters made me dislike it. I would suggest that to new readers, you try reading it yourself to make a decision, but for me, I think I will stop it a third of the way.
Writing Quality - 4
Stability of Updates - 5
Story Development - 3
Character Design - 1
World Background - 3
The total score - 3.2
This book is so much better than the other books you wrote. I don’t think you should let the criticism get to you but use it as a tool to learn and not drop this novel from it like the last novel.
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don't read this one if your aren't a fan of glacial pacing I'm 55 chapters in and the MC is only level 4 and two days have passed so gonna be a long one