It's able to keep my attention. Just hope that the sister has more scenes. The classmate girl is the typical tsundere which is not bad at all, just the sister is better. Not enough chapters to say much else. Hm. I like that he has the ability to take items out of the game AS WELL as taking them into it. Hope you update more frequently in the future.
here and I give review better compare to 1 star and this is the real review.
this story is bad after reading into 1st chapter. the one thing I hate about mc is her personality. even though I read at 1wt chapter I know where the story will went well. Just read at first chapter. And the world background is quite bad because the author did Chinese novel and Korean novel a cultivation world with technology and a tower! it's exactly what you think so yeah
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What a fabulous writeup!! Your book is very intriguing and motivating. I can feel my spirit move by just reading few chapters. What a good storyline! More inspiration to you, Author!!
Amazing concept and writing , one of the best novels ive read so far on this page , the only real flaw is that it needs more chapters , even if the author dedicates one chapter per week i'll be satisfied. need MOAR!
interesting book, it's suspenseful and Awesome! one chapter is enough to make you wonder what's gonna happen next.
awesome work so keep it up!
Good topic
Carry-on this and good luck
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Top class novel avoids that useless troupe of chance encounter with women to form romance and harem , sensible mc not just useless chance encounters, but author Nim when are you dropping new chapter or have you dropped the novel
This one convinced me to leave my first review ever. Been on Webnovel for years and years, and this feels like a combination of some of my all time favorites. If you enjoyed the organization management portions of History's Number One Founder, this is for you. If you liked having to front as an all powerful being and develop others the way things were done in Lord of the Mysteries, then this is also a great one for you.The MC has realistic motivations and responses to events, he's rational but isn't a robot, and it takes advantage of tropes you'll love if you've read a bunch of other system based novels.Dropped every Golden Ticket and Power Stone I had saved up on this. Try it out all, it's well worth it.
It's been a great story so far and am sure it will pique anyone's interest.. Am a fan of football so when I saw the novel was about football I rushed. Good work Author.
Webnovel says that this novel isn't even rated ?
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