I really hope this gets choosen because it is really the best one of this batch.
I am sure Webnovel could earn more money through this story as people are more likely to purchase chapter for this one.
Please give this novel a chance.
I like the title and I think that this novel will be a great very incredible read.
I have read several chapters of this novel.
good job, author.........................................................................................................................................keep it up
This book is great I really like but the author refuses to fix the broken chapters 40-50 after several months instead is still releasing more chapters .when they fix that they can get there 5 stars.
The story starts with a unique twist, unlike many books. I was bound to read it to see how the good could be so easily drawn to the other side.
The story is detailed well enough and in simple language, making it easy for the readers to understand.
I loved the new levels being bestowed and how they were implemented. It's amazing that I could see a new world through the eyes of the MC.
Well done, Author-san! Keep up the good work ^.^
The story is truly touching and quite relatable, being awaken from a fake utopia is my type of plot after all. Although I've seen lots of stories of this theme, this one's unique in its own way. The characters are portrayed to be realistic, as well as their actions but reading it is very entertaining.
So, the writing quality is well and decent but I believe there are still room for improvement (purely from a reader's pov, I'm not a professional writer either). I suggest you add more descriptions to the dialogues or describe the current scenario in a more detailed manner, to aid with the reader's visualization. There were some grammatical errors but that's totally fine and does not get in the way of understanding the story (I myself commit that most of the time lmao but too lazy to check them), proof reading is the key, YAS.
All in all, the slice of life genre was given justice to and that's a big thumbs up! The story development is good and I am looking forward to how it will progress further. Keep it up!
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The synopsis of the story is intriguing. The author's vision and world-building are great as well. The fighting and massacre scene was full of anticipation. Well, more could be done but the author had put in his effort—it is worth a try. Nice one...
the opening was so nice, and you could feel the chaos and unbalanced waves, the system begins a bit late but don't worry, you will be entertained enough on this voyage with pirates. [img=recommend]
after a veryyyy long time, I'm finallyyy back! the first thing I need to do after coming back on webnovel is to check out sora's novel. I'm so excited to start my journey with sora's new novels yaaaay! congrats for your so many new novels and congrats for me for so many many to read lol
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