This is the best one out of all the novels this round..
Writing quality - 3 starsNo obvious grammar mistakes... but the vocabulary is lackluster and monotonous... sentence structure is poor because it feels like reading a diary (also author repeats mc name almost every paragraph and it is annoying) Update stability - 3 starsI'm neutralStory development - 3 starsThe pacing is good... events flow in a logical manner ... but there is no suspense, no mystery (story is too predictable and scenes are too lukewarm)Character design - 2 starsCharacters are generic having atmost two traits with nothing more to them and only mc changes... but the mc's change is contrary to his personality(mc will go from callous to wishy-washy to depressed to determined in a span of three paragraphs...he is more emo than sasuke)World background - 2 starRarely is a place named... there is almost no description of places... the rest is just like the real world with no creativity (there is no immersion when i can't mentally picture the setting) It is an interesting read at first but it quickly loses its momentum... the protagonist is dull, the setting is hard to imagine and the plot is far too obviousGood to read once in a while to pass time but otherwise...
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Below average novel. Good from the start but drops all the way down mid story. Mc getting lamer by the second and unstable personality. Too much pet abuse and mc feels like a psychopath
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Well this story was a surprise. The premise was what initially caught my attention. It was nice to see a cultivation novel in which the MC is driven by something else than just simple will to be stronger. He wants to see his family again and that is commendable. He works hard for it and it's what makes him relatable. Wish him the best of luck in his struggle and cant wait to read the happy ending. ?
Very fun story, but the book has bren done many months now and its still trying to scam privilage purchase to be able tinfinish the story. Very sad but As Much as i Want to know the ending I am not wiling ti oay privilege to finish the book
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I also really enjoy the Setup and hope, that you can keep up the good work. It has a really unique worldbuilding and a good amount of Slice of Live which I enjoy. The Action has also a nice timing, so that you don't get bored and just thinking about what he will build next is keeping me tense.
So far i really like it, it's different and that's good many stories are far too similar. There are some grammar mistakes here and there but it is still easy to read, and there are not huge useless explanations either, so i recommend this novel.I look forward to more.
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I don't really hate this story, but let's be honest. The writing is at the level of a 12-year-old kid who decided to write a story of his own. In fact, I bet that many 12-year-olds would do a better job. The beginning and the premise are completely copied from a Korean novel with a similar name. The main character is one-dimensional while the side characters are ZERO-dimensional. This story and system are so simple that even someone with a 70 IQ would understand it easily. There are plot holes starting from the first chapter. There the MC said something like "I hope that I'll awaken a useful ability"... But in fact, in this world, there are no abilities to awaken, lol. If you aren't facepalming at most of his decisions then let me congratulate you - you've passed this IQ test with 80 points! Yay! So why is this popular? I think that this story, Vampire System, and Cultivation Online show you what you need to succeed at Webnovel. Op protagonist, a fast pace so that he could show off how OP he is, fast release rate so that people could get addicted to your story. That's it. Other people waste their words by trying to write a story that makes sense, the only one who managed to get to the top with such an approach is the author of Supreme Magus.