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Let's See where it will go, Look to the Stars for it is Humanity's Birthright to conquer and expand.
Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried.I am still dipping my toes into the literally fiction pool, finding what works for me and what doesn’t. Books like these are definitely my cup of tea.This book is like the dystopian Lord of the Rings, with its richly developed culture and economicsAnd also the supporting cast of characters is excellent.Please update more author.
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Please continue writing, unique concept and good motivation. If possible increase chapter length and release frequency. Thanks for your hardwork. More more more.
My first impression was that this story is really well written. The author clearly knows what they're doing. I found the MC as a likeable character. I see what other people mean about him being a unique lead. It was a very believable character description. Added to my library! Looking forward to seeing where this goes :D
I love it! :) Waiting for the day this author is cameoed XD....I need a lot of characters for this review to be put up but I guess this should be enough right? Omg, this wasn't enough...this was though.
The story is getting interesting more and more. Author I want to know whether this is vampire or Werewolf or ghost story. Waiting for Ur next update ??
Thank you for the Adventure. Please continue releasing more chapters. Dont give up! This is an amazing story thus far. The backstory detail is phenomenal and the characher detail is so amaxing i can vividly see them
Here is the review after reading first five chapters.Writing Quality: 4/5 as there are still few mistakes that needs to be taken care of. However, its understandable and with a few editing, it can get 5/5.Updates: Knowing Swan, you can trust the work ethic and the update stability. A solid 5/5.Story Development: Not much till now, but the 1st chapter and the foreshadowing with all the stuffs happening is something to look forward to.Character Design: I like our MC Alix. He seems closer to realism while still remaining a fictional character. I hope I was clear enough XD.World Background: Not much revealed but I am looking forward to it.And cover! Its OP asf.
OK this is an actual review. I started this novel because like you I thought since it said 5 stars and there a bunch of 5 stars ratings but that is NOT the case. I got to chapter 165 and this is toxic dumpster fire garbage. Why go so far as 165 you say? Well naively I tried to stick it out but it was just so bad. Characters are about as cliche and flat as you can imagine. MC especially. There's no struggle, no real development because everything is handed to him on a silver platter. Even supposed impossible trials are magically achieved because he "happened" to somehow exploit some loophole. And if the Main Character is bad, the supporting characters are worse. They are just there to make the MC look good and power of friendship. No real value. There also just no clear plot line. So much gets introduced and put aside. Like for the Main character is trying to climb a tower dungeon while also being a first year at a school while also being apart of some secret organization then out of nowhere he's attacked from different world from outer space?!? (yes this actually happened). Just makes no sense.The writing quality is also clearly subpar. So many grammer and spelling mistakes it's comical. While I don't mean to be rude but this is no doubt machine translated at best with no revision effort afterward. Updates was a positive. Very Consistent. But thats it. Background is promising but not fleshed out very well or at all really. Many countries and places but no attempt to talk about them or make then anything more then stating "this town in this country". Any way long story short, this is so trash, it's not even good enough to be guilty pleasure trash. Have some standards.
Just another great book I came across this month in Webnovel. Author has a really significant skill to make the fiction feel real that I felt like I was right there in the story!