The number of chapters is low for now but even then I can say that the novel has a lot of potential. The story flows smoothly and there is no major error in grammar and vocabulary. Adding this to my library since I am looking forward to future developments. Keep it up author!
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The story is set in Poland during medieval times, with the MC reborn from a modern gamer playing the game, to a novel coming from an illustrious background. He's respected but he's middle-lower echelon in terms of nobility.He knows a bit about this part of history, yet what truly gives him the foundation to stand out and develop is that he knows one simple fact about their current king, which is that he will abandon his kingdom and flee in 4-5 months time.This isn't something that by itself will make him rich and powerful, but it gives him the opportunity to take advantage of that fact. The way he's growing his influence, wealth and power is by making innovations and improvements to already existing things.For example, his beer business is doing really well, and he has expanded to 3 territories 112 chapters into the story, (all 3 of which are his, haha). His beer is considered to be on a different level, and knowing this he made it famous by using a couple of opportunities to make governors and nobles try it during noble social events in order to spread it.There's no ridiculous cheats, he doesn't get thousands of gold of income after a couple of chapters, hell even after 112 chapters that's still not the case.While from what I've said so far you might think that the MC's just good for making money, that's not the case. Funding an army is not so easily done, especially when your territory doesn't make enough money a month to open up a solid business. There are also the issues of manpower, which can't be solved in a short period of time by regular means, which means he needs territory if he wants more population fast.I can go on and on, but basically, him focusing on economic development so far is mostly because he needs it as a foundation to grow further.The main point that has attracted me to this story, is that the MC isn't a knight in shining armor that will risk his life for nothing. He's neutral, which i can deal with.The main issue I have with it however, is that while he kills most of his enemies, I don't find him ruthless enough. *Spoiler below this*Most recently, he defeated the man that wanted to take his wife as his own in a war in which he killed almost all of the enemies soldiers, and after the man stands on trial and is exiled, he doesn't off him after he's exiled. Yes he's already gotten all of his territory and money, but offing him is no problem and I don't see a good reason for him not to do it. Some smart nobles would know it was him that made his enemy mysteriously disappear, but so what? It's not uncommon and there won't be proof.So far the author has shown that he doesn't use tropes, but if the exiled guy with nothing to his name makes problems for the MC in the future, that's grounds for dropping the book. Overall it's a great novel, among the best of its rare kind. Novels similar to this are Black Iron's Glory, The World Online, etc.
One of the best novels with Op mc and background just to my liking. Just hope the story won’t develop like those cliche novels. MC right now is not bad, I mean he ain’t like those arrogant fools who go around offending everyone though this mc’s background is op tis not invicible after all and his backing can’t fight against the world alone, he is rational not like those trash who lose themselves out of a little provacation, not like those prideful or face valued fools that don’t know how to take a step back leading to a disaster, at least now he ain’t like those pathectic and rightheous or evil mcs who would go around causing unecessary troubles and being chased like someone who deflowered the heavenly emperor’s favorite daughter which shoulda never happened b/c things aint got nothing to do with them , not lustful like those harem seeking idiots etc. Hey, i just hope that after The Dao heart trails he get sublimated in hist mental state and mood, become calm like ancient well and restrained. In the cultivation world benefit is paramount, i don’t even know why 99.9% of transmigrators always neglect this fact. It is not like they don’t know, they read countless novels and knows almost everything they should be the calmest and low key people out of all in the cultivation world. Although sometimes things are not controllable, many troubles can still be avoided, most of them be face slapping, short tempered, proud, domineering to the point of stupidity, after money, woman and immediate power saying “ I wanna pretend like my fellow transmigrators” This is absurd, why should you be like them just because you have the same origins and do brainless things without getting any benefits, later they get angered full of resentment by being betrayed by their so called woman or the one they trusted the most at critical moments when they already know ‘trust’ don’t exist in cultivation world ofc their good parents is an exception but cannot even be absolute trust in them; the human heart is unpredictable as long the benefit is worth the loss even the so called bottom line can be broken, the holy saint can become the devil. Only few of the MCs put their knowledge from earth to use and Use the heaven and earth as the chess board, sentients beings as chess pieces and making use of those fools who can’t control the greed in their hearts, calculating the heavens and playing a game of chess with heavenly dao and the opponents. In short MC can’t get too emotional and let emotions affect his mood and decions otherwise he should go be a mortal and live some life under the threat of death at anytime since mortals are ants.Anyways, this novel starting is good, just hope that it won’t develop in a disappointIng direction. More chapters need.
The MC is an idiot,thought he would be smarter but apparently not. The grammar is pretty bad and it doesnt get any better with each chapter. I dont think this is a good story.
This novel is good and you are doing a great job. This translation is good too so thank you very much. I think this novel deserves 4 stars?
Another “slap everybody” novel. The main hero is god of martial arts from the start, so all fights are boring, and the only story development slightly interesting, but skipping chapter after chapter waiting when slapping would over and story continues it is not what I want to read.
This book is doing rAther well and i am totally loOking forward to more. character development is in its way along With some romance and the begining of The MCs career. i like how hes not entirely reliebt on his system but wOuld enjoy seeing more development with that too. yay and best wishes! ♥️♥️♥️♥️
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