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am impressed u read this shit to that point, u have earned my respect
Hey is this harem? And it seems Mc was getting stronger to protect his loved ones in description but he just transmigrated to a GAME world and already he is getting stronger to protect strangers that maybe not be real individuals kinda seems strange to me
Dumadamoves ang loko, He is like a big bad wolf luring red riding hood into his den
A good novel so far.
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A shameless 5-star author review!
This novel has a perfect blend of both an ordinary urban world to a complex fanasty system! Whether in landscapes, buildings, cultures, or even races!
The writing quality and update frequency is consistent and stable. With little to no errors in its grammar or even the timing between uploads!
Characters here are both dynamic and devolping throughout the story. Whether it’s a Tsundere childhood crush to a cool headed Kendo Club Captain. Moreover, the characters are varied from a loveable Yandere to a adorable Femboy!
*Cough* *Cough*
Who were all rooting for...
*Cough* *Cough*
FInally the story devolpment is clear and well paced. Through multiple Arcs that will devolp the world and characters, along with giving Oliver the time he needs to shine.
Really, the story is well thought out and might even make you shed a few tears. Of course, a fight might break out in the comments, about who is the best waifu!
( We Encourage It! )
Femboy is the best, so the fighting isn’t really needed.
I love the story!! Can’t wait for the next chapter!!
This is an opinion based off of a small part of the story, so be sure to at least attempt reading before developing your own opinions;Honestly, I couldn’t bother with reading more than the first couple chapters, as I lost interest rather quickly. Everything, from characters to plot, seem incredibly bland. It feels flat, and rather lifeless. Maybe it’s just lack of experience writing, or maybe things are lost in translation, regardless this just wasn’t engaging enough to bother reading.The formatting being a mess was just icing on top of the cake.
I just found this and love it, unfortunately it looks like the author dropped it since it hasn't been updated in almost a year. :(
With just the title, it seemed to have potential. Looking great with just the title and cover. The synopsis made me hooked instantly, it captivated my heart. Reading a few chapters, the flow was nice and not choppy to read. The author was talented so the novel was in good hands! Cheers!
even though i'm not a fan of this genre but this book has totally changed my view . As a ******** fujoshi i say that this book is a hidden diamond in a rough .At first i thought its going to be the same old cultivation development , but i was totally wrong about it this book make me laugh like a pig and now my stomach ache from all the laughing ????? ahh the author is creative and i think his hand is made only for writing by the Gods .and now I'm going to add this in my reading listsP.S sorry for the long review ?
Well I like the cultivation on modern years but this have greatly spoil all of the story with it namings all the characters have Chinese names and Scott well he name in english when it also mentioned in chinese. Arg you really just translate the chinese novel to an American one.
I have just started reading this book and am loving it. I agree with the one comment stories like this are rare. I wish more people wrote books like this. It shows often the truth behind a person and how cruel people tend to be. It points out good points and have a great back story to the mc. I love it really goes into detail with out boring the reader to death. I also love how like the one comment said you can really see and understand the mc reasoning. I also love how u go into detail but also keep it interesting. Like I often finds good books that sometimes gives you too many boring details. Or often enough that they is irrelevant to the story at hand. Also thank you for writing this novel we need more novels like this. Hope you continue to write more chapters and books like this.
