Pretty good some details that me as a reader would like to have are skipped but has lots of potential. For example ( visuals are severely lacking about the Mc, his female partner, his weapons etc.)
I think this author is swinging for the fences! The quality of his novels is high, it is not the usual mainstream or poor quality thing that the books of this platform very often offer.We have to give importance and reward those who deserve it as Immanioripse and his wonderful books.It really has great potential.Keep goin on and don't stop believing please.
I’m mad
Would gave it a 4 Star if Mc was not this dumb
31.12.2021 - 01.01.2022
For some they either are happy with their Familie and friends or alone and for others they are with their Familie and friends or alone but they are sad deep in their heart.
Good story, but not worth read after chapter 40 because they keep that very one thinks he poor and lying thing Going when he have be shown and seen spending large amounts of money.And we still know nothing about the family or his place in the family so, we know nothing about why he's even has to go through all this mess.Reviewed at chapter 42
So, I really liked this novel. I thought it was an interesting use of the simulator, and kind of funny. I just want people to know that I read the RAWs and the story ends all of sudden. Like, literally everything is normal one chapter, and then the next it has a simulation that ends with a summary of the end of the series, and then at the end the author apologizes to all the readers @.@ Just giving people a warning before they use coins. Use free passes for this series! I still enjoyed it!
Even though there are a lot of stories about gaming and computer but this one is unique in all of them, the world background, character, and grammar is really good.
it is a great story with an unresponsive community ,it might be some people's might not be for others i got hooked on the second chapter read the first 10 chapters than decide whether it is worth continuing or not (p.s there might be grammatical mistakes which will break the immersion so if you find any mistake than post a para comment on it ,this author sees them and corrects them accordingly , if you hit the mark. so, don't worry about being ignored)
Actually guys this is my book, I may not be perfect at the first chapters but it's worth interesting as you go down the lane. I'd be happy to see what y'all think about it. I love y'all readers. Happy reading.
Nice, you write well without showing too many mistakes in grammar or punctuation. i like the way youre taking this on the characters. i too am not a fan of 1 dimensional villains or characters that simply have one quirk that defines their whole persona. The world could be described more intricately but i believe youve done a good job. keep writing ✍️
A very new concept and I can give 5 stars just for the uniqueness of this story. Character development is marvelous till the latest chapter and the mc is just perfect ?✨ and fmcs are also portrayed very beautifully and their possessiveness is also justified due to the world setting. I highly recommend everyone to at least give it a try and I guarantee you will be hooked.
its a very good novel but the only problem i have is the super slow story like from chapter 200 to 300 only a few days have passed...................................