Amazing novel. Your Way of writing and the vivid description of everything is so good. And the dialogues aren't cringey at all, they're amazing.
Loved the Female lead and her attitude. Im jealous of her achievements though. I need to read some more to learn why is she called child of death i guess. whatever i read so far is nicsly done and hooks the readers completely. good Job author
Welp, here I am giving my own novel a five star rating... pretty odd but I have no choice, I need those ratings and reviews so bad. Anyway, I thought I'd be dropping this right after the contest ended but the ideas just raided my mind and I can't stop typing... For my other book, I simply feel lazy.
I can't really assure frequent updates since I'm always busy... but then, I hope you stick around to find out what'll happen to our MC in the very end.
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This is a transmigration story like others before where the MC takes over a body and has a knowledgeable spirit master to help guide him to cultivate. The interesting and enjoyable part of this story for me is where the MC takes a backseat and is more like an observer as the plot unfolds around him. The author does an excellent job of highlighting characters around the MC and provide very reasonable points of views for all the characters, even the villains. There are no young master drama, face slapping or unnecessary killing.
SPOILER: I completed reading the raws for this story. After the wonderful first volume/arc, the story tanks for me. It becomes a harem focused, women chasing drama with all beauties (15+ ish) falling for the MC as he explore the world and gets involve with their dramas. The MC even gets his master, his personal disciple and her aunt, his not blood related sister and her master, etc... you get the point. The author admits at the end of the story that he made the change due to low subscriptions from the first arc and doubled the subscriptions after focusing on the harem, which is too bad because this could have been a unique and interesting story.
You have a really good vocab base and definitely an amazing storyline.. I am basically really amazed by this book.. Would love to read many more chapters..
honestly ita too much like the levels and the system and everything is just too overpowering and it doesnt have that tag the synopsis makes it seem like itll be way harder than what it is for the mc and well everything kinda just falls in his lap the characters hold barely substance in their personalities and the mc "remembers" all hes done on earth which is alot but it happens at random times ig the author was trying to flush out his character more but like it didnt work and was kinda annoying after a bit like ik mc is a genius amd what not but like again remembering all that stuff should have been in the beggining instead of in the middle also and he just gets to op to soon and his personality well what i can make of it at least is to say erratic not ero but like chaotic and never really focusses on one thing or another story doesnt feel natural at all and im more than comfy with isekie
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One the best so far i have read and it is an awesome novel????????????????????????️???????????????????????????????????
Review time~I only read 3 chapters and this is what I think about it,The story started with brief explanation of the two realm death and life which attracted my attention. and you wrote it very well and I felt as if a anime is palyijg inside my head.Then at second chapter we get to see the ml ( maybe) in modern Era which was a nice choice but....to think that everyone will have power seems good but will 3020 really be like that with gangsters? It feels a bit off...well then again it's fantasy so anything can happen.And as for the main character back story it was sad and realistic which is a plus point ( bf r@ped his sister *sigh* bitter reality of our world) And last but not the least~ Good work author, you are truly hardworking!
So I didn't actually read the novel yet however from the synopsis I could tell that this is one my brothers GENDER EQUALITY for all men and women
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