The MC worked as a security guard, probably for drug dealers to make enough money for college. As he spends all his time securing deliveries, probably opium, he can't take the course himself so he sends his girlfriend to take the course. After he was betrayed, he put four shots in both and before being arrested mysteriously went back in time. Watch this new story where the mc knowing the future, takes the money from college, buys a rifle, robs his old bosses and makes his first billion, not even screwing this crazy man invested the money for a graduation and became a billionaire. I can't wait until the part where he converts everything to bitcoin and moves to Russia.
I just have to ask, is there missing chapters here or not? Because I tried on some others site like "Light Novel Pub" but so many chapters were missing. I was wondering is this one have them all.
What the heck is this paywall? They promised when the moved a bunch of novels over here from fan sites that they would never have an absolutes paywall! Shocking!
You wanna know if this is worth it? If you ask me then I'll say this is absolutely worth it. Just look at the likes, you'll know.
I even shower it with all the fast pass I got and didn't regret it. Do you?
[As of Chapter 213]
- World Background -
Expect a lot of geography, locations, factions, and history.
The author has made a particularly vast world which you can feel from the descriptions, and interesting phenomena sculpt the various locations.
- Story Development -
Sometimes slow, sometimes fast, the author has a balance. There is a system to the development of the MC that makes sense. Sometimes it is luck and fortune that helps the MC, sometimes he advances through bloodshed and great battles by experimentation. The wars involving countless cultivators could be written better.
- Character Design - The author has variety in character writing. The problem is that there are too many characters being constantly introduced and forgotten. The character flow cuts the potential of some characters short, such that the reader is only stuck with the MC when it comes to attachment or eagerness to see certain character interactions potentially happen and develop.
-!!! Translation Quality !!!- Readers beware: Write a glossary (names list) as you read the novel.
The weakness of this novel. I gave it 3 stars only because the English is good and understandable, ignoring a few spelling and grammar mistakes that happen rarely enough.
I don't know the accuracy of Chinese-->English as i'm not a Chinese speaker, so i can't state anything here.
The big problems are naming standardization and a lack of an official glossary for the readers.
The longer a novel updates without the editing staff having a joint glossary,
the more time will be wasted on fixing a novel, just like a long-term disease,
the more unwilling the staff will become to fix the novel.
The character names, location names, and other names, are all over the place, as in, some names have multiple variations with the translation constantly shifting between them, not being able to settle for a single name for good for the same thing. The readers are then thrown into confusion, or unable to google search certain names when they need to recollect who or what they are (because the name is differently written in that earlier chapter).
Big problem for readers who follow and read more than 30-40 novels.
The Translators are off the hook, because this is solely on the Editors to do.
Some of the examples are (and this is a tiny list because i don't want to do the work of the editors for them):
- White Mystery Nation/White Wonder Nation
- Wild Goose Falling River/Falling Crane River
- Natural Moat Gorge/River Sky Canyon
- Sky Serpent Nation/Sky Snake Nation
- Heavenly Wind Country/Windy Nation
- Sea of Soul Realm/Spirit Ocean Realm
- Yuan Hengkong/Yuanheng Kong
- Yin Wuqing/Leng Wuqing
- Qiu Ruodan (Color Sword)/Qiu Ruotong
- Song Qingyun/Shen Lang (Blue Clouds)
- Fei Wushuang/Zhuang Fei (Emerald Childe)
- Liu Wuxiang/Liu Waxiang/Liu Xuxiang (Palm Termination)/(Broke Palm)
Each line above is one character or location or faction or other, with different names. You can imagine what kinds of problems this brings to the readers, or can bring to them.
All in all, the novel needs some serious re-editing for translation quality to go anywhere beyond 3 deserved stars.
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Too lazy to write a review.
MAYBE A BIT SPOILER but you will know this from ch1
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A bit clisé but far of the level that vampire system had.
There s only 25 ch but it seems the MC has it s own way of serving justice by killing everyone... he wants to kill everyone cuz he thinks thats the righ decion maybe he will change.. I dunno just read the 1ch to its half and you will know if you want to read this.
WHEN R U COMING BACK??? THIS BOOK WAS AWESOME AND I WANT TO KEEP READING IT!!!!!
absolutely love it! but we need more chapters! please lord-sama don't give this up and focus on it!
classic pet novel with an MC with op hack. novel begins fast pace, (only one month in school). novel is good until chapter 350. novel changes after arc in first city dwarfs.
This is actually outside what I usually read and what made me want to finish is the writer’s good grammar and descriptions. Good job writer, I look forward to reading more.
So this story is really good!. I enjoyed DTNSOP but this is different from that. This book focuses more on love and drama and it really gets my readers bug going. PLEASE KEEP UPDATING