the story concept is good, game talent in martial art world. ealier chapter has a nice progress, the plot is not too fast and also not too slow. but in the 10+ chapters the author lost his brain juice and wasted 10 chapters more with fillers that can be deleted without disturbing the plot and then the story become unworthy to read anymore. so dont wasted ur coins or tickers to read it. i drop this one for now... i hope author rewrite the story with less fillers and less wasted chapters.
This novel is good for a quick fun read. It is definitely a comedy genre novel, so don’t click on it expecting dog-blood drama or hot-blooded protagonists.Personally, I think that the best part of this novel is learning about the alternate earth that it is set in. Humans can live to be over 200 years old, with the publically known oldest being 280. Of course, the MC is several hundred millenia old, and has the historical artifacts to prove it.Summary: popular alternate-universe celebrities are participating in a reality tv series, and happen to encounter the MC who is living in a small village. The MC’s house is full of super-expensive items, which shocke the world when experts analyze it. For the public, even the food the MC eats can make A-level celebrities bankrupt, but to the MC it’s just low-level items that he’s been gifted ‘recently’. TLDR: a good comest story for a quick read, but almost no potential as a popular novel
The only decent thing about this waste of time is interesting and unique world setup. Otherwise annoying, plain and boring read. So, if you're interested in something to just waste your time this one fits the bill if not - just skip.
I only read the first chapter and it bored me to death this book truly isn't interesting!
OK, the story concept is actually quite decent, though execution is very bad. Yes the grammar is bad though it looks like steps have been taken in the early chapters to make it decent. Then comes the items that are being sold, as well as how things are being bought and sold.A pawn shop buys and sells goods to and from customers. I have seen one instance where he buys from the customer or more like sells an item for collateral.Needed changes: Grammar correction is going to be first for most readers, but not for me here. It is needed but for the most part the story is readable.Buy and sell. He should be buying various raw materials with his 'limited' funds. He is selling for spirit stones, yet going around buying herbs at shops for gold and such. This is a function he should be doing in his shop. Buying from gatherers who go out looking for resources. As for gold, even if the 'system' does not allow his products to to sold for gold, he should be stocking gold coins to buy certain raw materials. Breakthrough pill concept. It should be a pill that is used when a cultivator is having difficulty making that final push to the next level. In the cultivation stories there are several types, one the protection pill that protects the cultivator in case of failure, another that reduces the resistance to the breakthrough, and the third would be called a level-up pill that pushes the cultivator's level up by 1 or so unconditionally. The so called breakthrough pill should be described as being the pill that allows a stuck cultivator to advance. Where in the story it seems like the breakthrough pill is actually a level-up pill. Level-up pills should be much more expensive, have strong side effects, or have extreme restrictions. Only can use 1 in lifetime is a common restriction.I recommend the author look for constancy errors. I am personally irritated by both consistency problems as well as conceptual issues. Add a system subspace for resources bought. He can pay the seller more that he would receive elsewhere yet pay less than buying at another store as he is eliminating one of the markups.The characters seem to be rather generic without much of a personality. You have the so called young master template, then there is the standard fairly reasonable characters who come in and are his customers. They seem to mostly be revised young masters both male and female. Now this makes sense as the background is that nearly all spirit stones are in the hands of the upper class families 'noble, royal, ect..' who monopolize their use. Once again a poor design choice for setting. We are reading a story in a cultivation world where everyone can cultivate to some degree. The pills in the shop are extremely overpriced based on their effects when put in the setting that has been created.
First off why is there so many 5 star reviews for this? It absolutely does not deserve the stars. It gives no actual feedback to the author by saying it's all good when it's apparent that there are problems in the story.I don't know what to say it's all poorly edited if even at that, there is not a single thing about this novel that could have been worse. Reading it is difficult due to constant spelling mistakes, wierd pacing and having half of the chapter just be stats that have zero meaning. I tried to at least give it a fair shot by reading through 30 something chapters thinking maybe it gets better it doesn't.Author if you're reading this can you try using a spell checking extension on your browser, it would make it so much more readable. I hope you don't get discouraged and try to improve.
Chapter 292 The protagonist tells another person that he does not want to be emperor, that he considers it a job that is not in his interest, and that he already has an heiress (a useless and foolish girl). He also says that he wouldn't mind being replaced by anyone.
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Found another sport/Football novel again, great. Read a chapter or two but I'm not really a fan of 1st person narrative so skipping this. Anyway great novel and good luck
Writing could be improved. Author really said Fk main’s iq and replaced it with a dementia person’s brain. lololololololololololololololololol
interesting enough to read
This book is abandoned. No updates in MONTHS. Fair warning.