I have only read 15 chapters and I think it is shaping up to be a great novel. I don't read a lot of video game fiction, but, something about this really hooks me. The story is fun without making it too convuluted. Cheers!
Lovely storey, its original and an anti hero Mc like this is a breath of fresh airThe only bad thing about this story is that there is constant errors in writing such as spelling mistakes or contextual errors (I.e: calling the mc a her or having some parts in French while the rest of the story is in English. Although the language mishaps are extremely rare) but it’s a good novel and I can’t wait for more!
I like the novel and hope you can continue .
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It was progressing alright. Then the grammar became horrible. I think they started using machine translation from chapter 50 onwards. It starts to read horribly. Don’t waste your time.
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Let me just say this upfront: the stakes in this text are incredibly well-managed, and I want to break down why. On the external level, the stakes are immediate and life-or-death. Su Qingqing is outside at night with a mutated rhinoceros that hasn't gone far. She knows it: "If she remained outside after nightfall, she would not live to see the next sunrise." This isn't background flavor — it's the ticking clock that drives her decision to pay twenty Level 1 crystal cores for a single night's stay. That's a huge amount of money for someone who's clearly struggling to survive, and the fact that she pays it without hesitation shows how desperate the situation is. But the internal stakes are what really get me. Su Qingqing has spent five years building walls around herself. Trust is dangerous. Kindness is suspicious. And yet here she is, letting a stranger help her, staying in her house, eating her food, sleeping in her bed. The conflict isn't just "will she survive the night" — it's "will she survive letting her guard down?" The author maintains tension brilliantly by never fully resolving this conflict. Even at the end of Chapter 3, when Su Qingqing is lying on that perfect bed, she's still wondering if it's all an illusion. "Was everything in front of her real? Could it be that she was actually on the brink of death, and everything that had just happened was merely a final illusion?" That's not the thought of someone who feels safe. That's the thought of someone who's been hurt too many times to believe in miracles. And then there's Miao Suisui's conflict, which is more subtle but equally important. She's a mayor of a growing town with a system to manage, and she's also genuinely trying to help people. The tension between her profiteering instincts and her actual care for Su Qingqing creates this delicious uncertainty — will she exploit this situation, or will she genuinely protect this girl? The text leaves us wondering, and that uncertainty is what makes the stakes feel real. The suspense is maintained through this constant push-pull between hope and fear, between the promise of safety and the memory of danger. And it works because the author never lets us forget where Su Qingqing came from — the basements, the stench, the steel plates — even as she experiences something beautiful.
nothing but a utterly trashy novel first it 90-99% copy of a previous novel second at that too it is a grabage copy way worse than the OG novel third it has a lot of plot holes to whom anyone can come up with a better plot last well it's just sh it
except from the pet part everything else seems so familiar to the " I can see hints " type of genre that has been seen constantly in trial reads. this is such a bore? I really don't feel any interest in reading this it's just a mash up of pet genre and hints genre
FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS there you're welcome Ryuu
Just having read the story, the chapters so far was absolutely awesome. Unlike Japanese manga this has 0 of the shounen type cliches. The story has a very real feel to it with very good characters. Series is completely different from other manga, such as Naruto, Bleach etc. You won't see any dokan type characters or lame power regression either. The power buildup is smooth and methodical and the protagonist uses clever ways to overcome his opponents when he's outclassed. The setting also have a great fantasy old China feel. Truly Epic
Highly recommend this novel to anyone. Having a large harem that the Mc treats well is refreshing and is one of the reasons I stayed to read this. Nothing else like it on the platform I’ll tell you that.