for now i'll watch it cause don't has harem or at least i guess so, and looks interesting, if i like it i'll back to edit this coment
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the idea could be interesting but the novel is poorly constructed, full of inconsistencies and grammatical errors and above all plot holes.the protagonist is an idiot
This story is great! Nice to see an MC being pushed into growth because he realises how weak he is from a near death experience rather than the cliched girl-dumping-boy or death of a family member. Plot is solid so far (ch.60) and I really want to see how the MCs growth continues on and the challenges he’ll face in the future, so,e of which has been alluded to already. Hope this gets picked up for continued tra elations!!
Writing Quality: 3/5 Average or readable enough, it lacks a bit of editing especially in the first chapters where the "i" is not capitalizedexample: "Where i am? is this a dream? 'Someone kidnapped me? No, there is no reason to throw me here then. Do i sleepwalked? No, i can't reach that far just by sleepwalking.'Stability of Updates: 2/5 UPDATE MORE! Like seriously it needs a daily update.Story Development: 4/5 I won't say it's the best but where can you find something so unique as a Slice of life wuxia? Where the main character is neither the antagonist or someone special more like a bystander type of character.Character Design: 3/5 Too be honest the only thing this story lacks is characters hopefully there will be romance in this since it can get boring really fast without any stimulation regarding relationships.World Background: 3/5 Average enough but not bad.Total score: 3/5Highly recommended even if my rating is a bit low, the plot is interesting, the writing even though not edited can be readable enough.In the later chapters, it seems to be fixed still you should edit the first few chapters with editing tools like Grammarly.
Good novel, I really liked the writing style. Atleast it's much better than the mtl or stale sign in novels being recently released. There is not too much nationalism just glimpses meshing well the story.
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please continue this. don't stop at the middle.
Ahhh so nice a read likey very much!!!! ???☺️???????????????☺️☺️☺️??????☺️??????????????☺️????will read start to finish!!!
The story has just started, and it already has that Saturday morning cartoon vibes. The action are spectacles, not just fist fights between two parties, and the character interactions are genuinely interesting, if a bit cliched.I look forward to reading more. If you're on the fence about the fiction, here's your call card to commit.
it was a good book to read just wish it had more chapters. if your looking for a fantasy like thrill and a good book this would be the one. though it is short, it's a good book to read in your spare time
Even if the story is good, for me the translation and mistakes in writing kills it. Please hire a good editor who knows his job.Please improve your English