I really enjoyed this story so far, i really recommend this story for reading. ????❤️????
DAYUM. I was totally scared out of my pants when i woke up this morning and founf your work deleted. I found thisbl again thankfully and read the chapters I hadn't yet......... AND I LOVE IT.... WE HAVE AN OFFICIAL SHIP NOW ??. HOPE I SEE THAT COUPLE MORE IN THE LATER CHAPTERS. PLEASE CONTINUE UPDATING. DONT STOPPPPPP
hello viola when i can see new chapter i cannot wait anymore because i love read your novel for full my daysyour storyline in all chapter so interesting and perfect
This has potential to be a interesting base building novel, something which we could always have more of on this site. Plus, even if this turns into dumpster fire so violent that even the heavens shake, it wont take any trial read spot. So this 5 star review is my hope for a good base building novel!
rooting for this to get picked, tho i ahvent read the other trials yet so can recommend please? word count word count word count wrod count word count
First off, I commend the super minimal grammar lapses. (Yo, that's important because it's difficult to read a story with so many grammar lapses.)Next, I love the story. :)It started with an interesting and emotional scene that will make you read more. (Some characters really annoyed me. I am looking forward to them getting messed up.)I am a gamer myself so seeing talk about game stats and other stuff caught my interest. It was well explained throughout the story. I could really imagine the situation and the effects of different stat to our main character here. His level, mana, etc. Even the items. BTW author, you have good naming sense for the items and skills.I like how the skills and items were described. As well as how the characters' emotions were portrayed.This story made me feel like I am playing a fun game. It's nice. ^_^Lastly, there's a cute character in this story and I am looking forward for it. Bloop bloop.I will continue reading this book.
I legit love this book!!!!!! I am just at chapter 21 and I feel like I'm completly hooked. Great story and mc is op but not like really op which I find great. Sincerely hope this book became something great!
All was good so far at the start but the story contradiction and mc is well the best full of ****.....one of the most craps it ruining the world you writing the story base on and put other world in it to make it more of a ***** crap.....you writing style os good but you brain process for this is story is well not even considerable.....good luck for the future development so you make a good mc and world BASED story to not ruin the world story with crao developments.....
My story is about a VRMMORPG with some common traits, but it also has its own characteristics. Because of this, I thought it necessary to describe some of the game mechanics for the readers do not to feel lost. As a gamer myself, I always have a difficult time understanding when a game novel showed numbers that don't make sense so I may have described a little too much about its details. And for me don't bore people to death, I began revising the first few chapters, trying to increase the writing quality and work more on the characters.
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This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
the story had the potential with assassination system but mc a normal person in previous life fighting to death with previous assasins all bloody and where did he get his stealth skill when he was in enemy commander room who was supposedly spirt realm and killed him but it took so much effort to kill organ tempering realm the realms in this are mostly decorations and despite having the system mc is still the trash with his pathetic cultivation