it's a pretty fun premise, and I think it had potential, unfortunately there's alot of "Great Xia" involved. I could only make it up to chapter 10, I could be wrong, and it's just the intro, but I can't be bothered to read 100 into another patriotic turn racism.The mc is your typical plays low key to face slap later, not the brightest OP fella, also alot of really successful people happened to be playing this game?? I disagree with the realism and probability of the events following the materialisation but it's fiction so whatever, but if it had a but more depth, and forethought could have been a real fun read.honestly if it's patriotism dies down later I'll probably come back to this book as just a time filler, but until then I don't want to be dreading the moment it will eventually turn into propaganda.
I haven’t read this book but from the synopsis there’s the early problem of making him exceptional yet still have time to do fun stuff. Alot novels try to humanize cut throat ppl which i find wierd when most cut throat ppl are putting in effort to make sure whats been built stays stable rather then spending time on actual hobbies.
The MC is a little too over powered. The leveling is very fast paced (at least up to C15). I find fault with the editing. There are often words missing or sentences that just need a little tweaking to work. Though as I can't see a translator or editor listed this may be an original work that's going through the "what's next" process and has never had an editor. The story itself seems interesting and there is a lot of room for the story to develop at this point. Lots of potential and may well improve as the author works on the story but it's a little lacking for my tastes. Still way better than many offerings put forth and one I think is worth giving the opportunity to shine despite my harsh rating.
I just like it. I'm sure about you guys, but I do wish the arthur would update the novel
Thank you for update . Keep it up........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The translation quality really lets this magnificent story down (e.g. terms being left in pinyin frustrates me - as i don't know whether the translator is doing that because he is lazy or he is simply oblivious).I recommend the translator spending the time and putting in some effort to go back from the beginning and edit some of the terms used so the story can flow better and provide an overall better experience for the reader.
can u fking finish ur damn stories I mean seriously we pay for this app and these stories stop wasting our money and time, a lot of us r waiting for u to finish some stories
This novel is a mess. It's to the point that it is no longer just wrong grammar, it's MLT level English where you would sometimes not even get the dialogue. Moreover there is idiotic level of face slapping moments for example 2 guards were fired from job just because they tried to stop mc when he was trying to enter the building. I mean any guard would stop him if he just vaults to the office without appointment, That is what his JOB! I don't understand after soo many bad reviews how can this novel still have 4+ star rating.
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Going good so far , definitely following it! No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!
overall it just a piece if average novel.just something to pass the time no real development...............................................
Hello I am writing the review for the sole of urging all of u readers out there to read this book. The reason's why u should read this book:1.The mc is overpowered and I don't mean only punches and kicks I mean the insults. He is way too overpowered in using his words and the insults are actually really funny. If I was in the villain's place I would have died just hearing his words.2.He is merciless and kills anyone who disturbs him in a cruel way.3.The mc is not a pushover and does what he wants.Anyway I only read till chapter 67 and I would definitely recommend this book