Gore, power, ***, and strength. If you want a story that isnt afraid of those types of generse. This is it. This story is mostly suited for male readers tho. It touches all of that and I most say the upgrade system is quite nice. My only hope is that i has -10% of cuck themes. I really liked it and hope it gets better. BTW get a story image it helps alot.
Author here!Hi Guys, I hope you enjoy the adventure of these unlikely heroes! This is my first Isekai/ Reincarnation Novel. So, pardon me if you find the writing crude. I am doing my best to improve my art and writing style. I hope you support this novel and don't be shy to comment, do a review or vote!Thanks for reading this!
hmmmm it's a good story but im just a little disappointed of the mc his naive as a half dragon my expectation of dragon but still i hope the mc can improve his mindset make the mc caring but at the same time can kill any enemy
as I'm writing this review I'm at chapter 8. as I've said author has lots of experience and that's been the case till now. as far as I can say this story will have lots of twist and turns which only adds to it's charm. Author tries to keep a comedic undertone besides the seriousness which make sth story more than enjoyable. so once again do give it a try.
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Well above average but still too early to say anything conclusive. -Flawed but overall OK translation.-Interesting concept, plot has decent potential.-Worldbuilding is intentionally unclear, so I can't really evaluate it.-MC seems sentient but everybody else is a mob character. (So far apart from the MC there only seems to be 2 noteworthy named side characters; the general and the adjutant and even they seem to have limited use. Not much has been introduced).Overall not too well written but not too bad either. This does come across as awfully bland at times but it is nonetheless one of the stronger novels from this batch. 3/5.
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Bro I will support you man, but you gotta do a better job with the MC. He’s is a f*****g beta man. Come on you could portray him better than that. Idk if you plan on fixing his mentality as the story goes on but right now your MC is making story suck. It’s my honest opinion man. Everything else is dandy, your MC is just not cutting it.
The world and characters in this story seem to be pretty well put together and the novel regularly updates. However, I am really conflicted on whether or not I like this story or will even continue to read it. Nothing has happened, nothing of note anyways. From the very start until chapter 31, which I am currently on, nothing interesting has happened at all. The name of this novel might as well be “A Mage Goes to School” because that’s all that has happened so far. I don’t mean cool fantasy combat type schools either, no.... the main character went to a school and he learned math and some magic theory and then he got a desk job. Realistic, sure, interesting.... hardly. Besides that, there are the typical grammar and spelling errors found on Qidian. I’ll give this novel until chapter 50 to pick up the story, if not I will just drop it.
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Im officially a fan your story is down right genius even beats most of the professional translations on this site. ??can’t wait till the book ? progresses even further
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