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I NEED A MASS RELEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE UPDATE IS TOO SLOW.!!! I WANT MORE OF THE MAIN CHARACTER LIFE STORY!!!????????????????????
I read until 75.The novel startet on the strong side, few grammar errors aso. so all in all something I'd like to read. Unfortunately the more I wrote the worse the quality of the story became. Grammar was still on the strong side, but characters didn't make sense anymore(including the mc) and I couldn't really identify them anymore based on their actions. Initially I tried to fel into them but it became impossible.The author mentioned multiple times how busy his job is and that he doesn't have much time so I guess there was less and less planning and thinking and he just rushed out chapters to match his schedule... which I guess is also a noble trait but unfortunately the story suffered under it and I can't enjoy it anymore
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Step 1. EatStep 2. Eat moreStep 3 Evolve Step 4. Eat mora againStep 5. RepeatStep 6. ProfitStep 7. ?????????????Step 8. Become a god?
An absolutely great read. Great story written by an author who knows how to open the world in his writings to his readers in a manner that relatable. Brilliant writing style that is never too difficult to understand and very enjoyable. Reading this story is really a memorable experience that one will be implanted in ones mind. I absolutely recommend it to anyone who loves a good well written masterpiece.
I really like writing style of the book. The author is very talented and shows a lot of potential. The story line is pretty interesting as well! I would actually say it’s better than some contracted stories on this app. Finding hidden talents on this app is always great :)
I really like how a baddass woman is mavys. You go girl! I really really like the fighting scene, the author narrated it very well. I am looking forward to the another upcoming scenes of the three: mavys, her brother and her uncle?Overall the story is nice????????? good job authornim:)
Although the sudden marriage, getting pregnant and separation is a bit cliche, I’m still interested in this story. I want to know how the twins ended up separated (I’m assuming they were) and ended up with each parent. I also like that the FL doesn’t seem to be a pushover. Hope this gets picked.