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me gusta los de transmigración y abofetear a los lotos blanco estupidos o malvados que se hacen pasar por buenas personas y destruyen a los personajes nuevos
Pls guys I'm sorry for not updating any chapters in this past week cause my phone was stolen and I've just bought a new one. I would endeavor to release more this weekend.Love you guys and yours forever, Larry.
An interesting tale of how destiny and fate binds the MC in a never ending and sad. There were times where it was hard to grasp what the author was trying to depict due to lengthy sentences. However, the story has a good flow and an interesting storyline.I'm looking forward to more. Keep up the good work.
This novel is so heartwarming, real and a nice change of pace of realism. It's story about a woman and her (most likely to become love-interest) friend and how their life and thoughts suddenly changes with becoming a mother and (proxy) father, and the joy that the changes bring. It's not a rushed romance, on the contrary the characters have their doubts about love and whether to take chances or not.Aside from the updates, the worth of this promising novel is +5/5.
Great plot, the idea is there. The starting was quite strong, diving down to the feelings of the characters. The writing quality could use some polishing, but future chapters should be fine.
This is a book with great potential! I'm waiting for your update!
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G'day friends! Here's a 5 section review for Flare's novel!Writing quality: Great writing. The grammar is good, and there aren't any spelling errors.Stability of updates: Batch released chapters as opposed to daily updates, which works for me!Story development: The story is developing slowly and with a lot of slice-of-life. The attention to detail is great, but the pacing is a lot slower than in most novels. Great for a slower read, but the excitement is a bit more spread out.Character design: The characters seem interesting, and have a lot of detail behind them. That said, a lot of characters are introduced very fast, (in the intro chapter) to the point that it is difficult to even tell which side they are fighting for. I'm sure that we will get to know the characters over time, but having so many new characters being named all at once was a bit confusing.World background: Has a lot of detail, and based off the end of the intro, there will probably be quite a lot of interesting stuff set up in the future!
I don't really understand. This thing is written in some kind of english language but you don't understand 9/10 of each chapter. It's really strange. I read the words and understand them but if you add the words into the sentence it just goes boof and you don't understand anymore. How did you manage that? Sorry but whatever this is, it is not a novel. Maybe it's some kind of secret message of a secret agency but it's definitely not a novel. I don't understand.
I am in love with the plotline of your story. I can see you went ahead and took your time to outline the novel for your readers to enjoy. I can't wait for what happens next. Happy writing.