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I'm back again. Reading this has provided me a good practice reference. Cameramen are the ones that give us the footage of everything we need to see. Humanity has always been to see is to believe and reading this has given me a realization that they are also heroes, providing the truth than written facts. Seeing is the most (but not the greatest type) of fact backers. So yeah I recommend this to all who wanted to read fashion models fight! Keep up the good work author, and by the way, I'm also learning how you write for me to improve myself.
It turned out great at the beginning, I had high hope for this to turn out into a masterpiece but I was wrong.After the free chapters, the translation quality goes downhill, though if you read MTL novels daily then it is still better than that.Also in less than 200 chapters, the story goes into the traditional Chinese cultivation.Can someone tell me if it did not go into that direction in near future chapters? Though I doubt it because this is a Chinese translated novel
I love the fact that the MC is not an arrogant A..Hole like in other stories.It is quite refreshing to read about a down to earth mc.I especially liked the part where he was not bothered about not being a Ying Yang Master. Many other MCs tend to go angsty and broody in such situations.Author and Translation Team, keep up the excellent work!
The main character being a doctor is already not new here in webnovel. With all of the novels that I have read with the same premise, I must say Ling Ran had pulled me in. Though it is worth noting that, it is the first time I have read a story where the MC is a doctor with a system. The fact that it has a system made me a little worried about this novel, since a lot of MCs with a system is just kind of TOO OP. But I was glad when I read through and finally saw the system in action, its not TOO OP.Ling Ran's system is OP don't get me wrong. Having knowledge injected in your brain and having experience of performing a surture imprinted in your muscles aren't exactly NOT OP. Since those things take time and effort to do, but with the system he can learn those instantly. But in the end, that is the only thing it does. It only gives him knowledge and experience. It doesn't make decisions for him. It gave him skills in order to accomplish his duty as a doctor but it doesn't interfere with how he will decide to use those skills. He can still very well mess up in what surture to use on patients or what thread to use. He still has control and I like that.Next is the MC himself. Ling Ran being the main character drew me in. I like how he is portrayed in the story. He is serious with his medical career but he can still also indulge himself in playing mobile games on his phone or even obsess with transformers. I also like how he reacted when he first got the system. He just feels real and fun to me. Lastly are the characters around him. I must say that some characters are too generic but I guess in all novels you can't really get characters that are fully unique. There is one character that I love though and she is Jinling. She is the sister of a patient that Ling Ran treated. I have to say that she matches Ling Ran's eccentricness perfectly. You know what she gave him as a gift? Patients. YUP. Think about it. If you like the things I have mentioned above, then try reading this novel. It's a fun read and the updates are pretty stable.
The grammer is bad but i like the story and his goal. I just hope Mc and Airin will be together forever and they will not betray each other.
Pretty good. It has a lot of typical shonen moments. it has over the top action, and some really cool powers. Like Kitsune, who has one of the most original powers that I've at least seen. It has some flaws though. The writing is good, and the grammer is godlike compared to some other stories I read, but this really, really suffers, from a terrible plot at first. its a slow start and basically nothing happens. but it does get better. I'd say once you get to about chapter 14-15 it gets better? And once you get to the first mission Arc it just gets good.
very good writing, the main character is interesting and not deplorable. the world is also complete and thought out, though the money thing is very questionable.
First 100 or so chapters were decent. There is an interesting setting, somewhat, an interesting MC and a reasonable but not over powered cheat. In most cases, novels with these three elements tend to become pretty popular over time, and the same should have happened to this novel if not for the author's shitty ability to plan for the future. Like most Chinese novels, our MC here gets a cheat, but one that is barely related to combat, or even personal growth. All it does is promote animals he captures into higher level monsters, that the people in this setting eat, to increase their stats. That's it, the promotion is done over a long period of time, and only one monster at a time, so i wouldnt even call it a cheat really, at best, its just a minor passive stat growth cheat. We come to a point where after eating a few more higher level beasts, our MC practically starts evolving, gaining skills and talents that he didn't have originally, skills that just so happen to be required to resolve the situation. In the first 100 or so chapters, this isn't really a problem and is still within the acceptable levels like most other wuxia. The problem comes AFTER he goes to that BlackHawk place. Nearly every single chapter after that point is complete bull crap. Random tournaments, Random sports, Random talent. All of a sudden, a stupid sounding sport is introduced out of butt fucking nowhere. There is no foreshadowing, it was never mentioned in the past 100 chapters. Just as instantly, our normal MC, with just his base strength alone, displays "incredible" talent, for this sport, that came out of nowhere. The sport/competition or whatever isn't even complicated. to illustrate, out of nowhere, there's something called black and white boxing, but when you read the description, and if you're not a complete idiot or water army, you will realize that IT IS SIMPLY ROCK, PAPER SCISSORS. Rock Paper Scissors that HAS TOURNAMENTS, SPONSORSHIPS, worshippers etc. To make matters worse, this does not happen once. It is repeated over and over again. From "warframe" piloting, to "heavy warframe" piloting, from "ärchery" to that hand game. over and over like a stupid as hell routine. From the brief and pointless introduction of said sports, an equally brief introduction and display of a random supposed super talented kid at said sport that again came out of nowhere all of a sudden, the usual whispers all around looking down on MC, the usual face slapping/ ego crushing when MC is suddenly a GOD at a game that neither he or the readers have ever heard of before that chapter, the sudden worship and attention from big figures, the big rewards. At this point, I feel like it's not that the MC is super talented out of nowhere, it is just that the universe he is in, is also occupied by God level idiots. The less said about the stiff, awkward and dumb as fuck "romance" the better. Am i salty that this novel somehow has 4 stars and above? not really. i just makes me lose confidence in the humanity.
Keep writing author! <333
A dangerous crime lord gives you his number. Tell you only to call him for emergency. His phone ring hello what’s wrong? I can’t make the coffee machine to work. I said to only call me for emergency. This is an emergency! Just to funny
I started liking the book, but the audacity of the ml, always grinning and having his way is upsetting to say the least. The way you also portrayed the fl as weak is so annoying.
loved the book I wish it didn't end
