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This is my first novel so I'm extremely nervous mainly because English is not my native language.I want to write every part of Zhen Han's life: from his birth to the moment he achieved everything he has desired. In his journey many characters would join him both good and bad. The mysteries behind his birth would be slowly revealed so please be patient ^.^I hope you like the chapters I wrote so far. If you're a new reader and not sure about this novel then please give the first two chapters a try ^^ Thank you.
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Hey, Author..can you continue the story.. For ME, your novel is fun and amazing.. I hope you can update more and put some more romance and action in the plot ????
I don't know this novel is dropped or in haitus but I just finished this novel . story is good 10/10 character are good story development is good I got hooked up but I just saw no updates from 8 months I don't know it is dropped or know author if dropped then just inform me if you are reading this comment if you are going to continue I will wait for it because I kinda liked this novel so (peace)
Haven't read it but the premise gives off a "The Legendary Mechanic" feel that went wrong, highly interested will pickup soon and be as highly critical as always!
I don't know what to say ....how the hell we going to find who's npc and who's player the one star missing from world background you could have done better 2. you explain whats happening like if there is players or not etc why the hell there many missing things inside novel for example you could have for every character (player/npc) you could have made stats for them like (any name)gendernpc or playerhealth / mana etc.there is no need for skills ....just basic stats doesn't take 3 or 4 line to doto make easier to understand the plot story its OK etc summary or conclusion it will be 100% better if you put introduction like confused what's happening in novel I have maybe read 17 chapters (when you read its very confusing)other than that it very excellent as you cans see from other reviews
so I read up to ch266 where he gets split into 2 people and everyone was so easily won over by his other half which is ridiculous I don't know if I even wanna read anymore at this point
gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub gub Shut Up and take my 5 Star rating (Im a Fish)
well i gave 1 * everywhere, while translation is not bad, but the story doesn't deserve anything more than 1* - MC is reincarnated super genius, with a "SuperSuper unknown Super person in his soul, - MC finds a lot of PlotArmor a random person gives him a super defensive armor, than he got a SUperMEGA SUPEr teacher (the shishu of this random personà, who gives a lot of superMegasuper defensive armor/weapon each time he needed it - enemy are everywhere, and the world is underthreat, but everyone is fighting MC and his people... for reason or without reasonMC finds another Supermegasuper Mirror.... random enemy appear and make random alliance with all kind of ppl, and eveyime they are enemy with MC...in this world there is 2 or 3 levels of power... the common ppl, the strong and the mega Strong ( MC teacher +2 of his 'brother' are part of them)- All bad Superpowerul ppl don't feel ashamed to attck mc and the world, but the Super megapowrful ppl of his side 5teacher, ...) don't try to to do their best because they respect an old agreement that we don't know about it..All in all. story fK up
am so much in with this book but sadly just too poor to unlock will relia on FP to read n thank to those free read
