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Urgently, Rin strode toward An Sun where his injured body lay motionlessly onto his black horse.
(If Edmund were here, he would have me get out of ther and not play the daredevil, but ...)
He knew she knew.
"I-it… it wasn't m-me..."
"Yap! I'm leaving in 30 minutes. If your coming then be ready." Sera said and left Akira to change.
I’ll be straight. This story is a mess. I see what the author is trying to write but so far in my humble opinion. It’s a mess. I’ll continue reading though, hoping it gets better.
This novel so far is quite good. i am not giving so much ratings now because of the updating of chapters but so far i love the novel. It sounds more like Kdrama high school movie but a little intense. i like the characters. Mia and her friendWilder and ice with his girlfriend Orange but not wanting to be a spoiler but i cant wait to see how the two lover birds would end their relationship so Mia could step in.
'Don't take what isn't yours; don't hold an umbrella that doesn't belong to you.' This metaphor is everything. An umbrella—that's such a domestic, everyday object, but it carries so much weight here. It's about protection, about shelter, about who gets to stay dry while others get rained on. Su Yirou has been holding an umbrella that was never hers for twenty years, and now Su Yiwei is gently, almost kindly explaining that the moment the wind picks up, it'll slip right out of her hands. The whole novel seems built on this question of belonging and authenticity. Who is the real daughter? Who deserves love? But the deeper theme is about the hollowness of stolen things. Su Yirou's entire identity is built on a foundation that isn't hers, and the author keeps showing us how fragile that is. Every time Su Yirou tries to assert herself, the ground shifts. The imagery of the family dinner—sitting around a table, sharing food, performing warmth—while underneath it all is this rot of deception. Beautiful and terrible.
Hello everyone, shameful author here :)I want to thank to everyone that spend your time reading 'Omnipotence As A Man'. Thank you for my loyal fans that have been supporting my works. Btw, feel free to comment on my story if there are any mistake. >_
Although the idea originates from other similar novels. But it has its unique story. Instead of helping the original protagonist or making the original protagonist talented. This novels starts with the original hero as a weak person. An interesting read. Looking forward to the updates.
I personally love this im currently all caught up. But the only thing I dislike is that our MC has the ability to to take other people’s skills but don’t really make use of them all to often. He mainly trains his fire and sword skills but I wanna see him make use of more of the elements and stuff, like what makes fire the most used element? and do the other elements have anything specific or special to them?
I love this book I really do I have been reading it sense it was in Royal Road. I like you very much but lately, most of you two chapters have been kind of short not in one of the reason I know this novel so much is because of his long productive chapters that I can play something not small chapters that does nothing but further the story with no point that's why has a fan in a reader I would like you to bring back your long chapters I'll pay the stones for them I just don't like to show chapters.
