Hello, Wolfy here.Most of the reviews are mostly true. About the start of the stroy anyway. The novel is HUGE, what I've done is just a glimpse of an iceberg. Kindly jump to the back a bit, you may find something that is "not so boring". The author didn't write a novel with 20+ million word count while boasting about the MC from start to end.Annnd sorry for the slow speed. As said, I'm not a contracted translator! The spare time I can spend on this voluntary work is really limited.Regards.
why can't the novel be continued. It's can of a let down
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What an magnificent and amazing cover. Even more so is the absolutely fabulous disclaimer at the bottom. Surely this author must be an exalted supreme being that we must fall to our knees and solemnly shout with all our soul.Praise Be!Blessed be us readers!
Amazing book, barely any grammatical mistakes, story development is wonderful and keeps me hooked, characters are relatable (I mean until they turned into freakin demigods, but personality-wise they are) and make me laugh, and the world design if frick frack a lackin awesome. Only downside is that MY MAN HASN'T UPLOADED IN FIVE MONTHS PLS I NEED MY BOOK CRACK
I honestly feel it's jumping the gun making the book premium so soon and that's why I've decided to make my review. Slight spoilers btw.The writing can get very repetitive, using the same words and identifiers constantly within the same paragraph. Character and story are also pretty generic. Kid died, got reincarnated, finds out he has a OP system, the works. As far as the MC goes he's about as spicy as flour. No motivation beyond "getting stronger" after they get invaded and he sees his parents die, it's now "get stronger to get revenge". His dialouge and interactions are pretty meh as well.. It's fight scene, talk about how crazy the fighting is during the fight, then eyyyyy I got some stuff, rinse repeat. Conversations are stiff and don't really add much, there is even a section where he and his father do entire conversations from looking at each other. Overall the writing quality is average, the world building is kinda interesting, almost more so than the main story line at times. But at barely 50 chapters with a pretty lackluster story and these issues I feel the author is riding off his success with other novels. His promise of a Mashup of novels seems to be the end goal and to me he's rushing there at the cost of the story.
I love how the author draws us into the emotions of the character. I felt so bad for AJ in the beginning, the story is well written, some minor mistakes but nothing that could be noticed too much. AJ is so mysterious, and even though he is a genius he still has flaws and shows a more human side. Unlike some characters that are just too perfect AJ feels really real in the story. I fully recommend this book! Keep up the great work Author~san.
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Translation is inconsistent as if made by machine. Chapters are also updated randomly sometimes. You'll find that some titles or names get changed from chapter to chapter. Sometimes, you will find the chapter you're reading is actually 10 chapters ahead but the translator mistakenly uploaded it first. Thing is, no correction is made. And this doesn't only happen once.As for the story itself, pretty lacking. I like how MC and Luo Li loves each other but the characters are rather boring. MC is also inconsistent. Once he reach a new arc, he will forget his old powers even though the power increases his attacks/control passively so no matter the power level, he will have the boost. The MC is known as Blood Calamity but as the story goes on, he kills less and less without any reason. The author makes it seem like he's smart but he's really not. Honestly, the only reason I'm reading it is because I loved WDQK and wants to find how this series end.
I hate reviews that give a ranking without any explanation, and unfortunately the most popular review for this novel is one of those. This novel's first chapters are certainly not the best. However, the novel does get much better as the MC learns to survive in a sect where all rules only apply to the poor, and all violations can be cleared with a fine. The MC grows throughout the series from a weak pushover with a weak mentality, to someone others fear and respect.Of course, everything I've just mentioned can only be seen if you move to the source material (MTL/RAW).In short, not a masterpiece, but it has many moments of laughter and definitely one of the best this site has introduced this month.
After reading the first volume of this novel we can very easily come to the conclusion that this at best a filler novel.Translation Quality - good enough, nothing superb - 4 stars.Stability of Updates - 14 chapters of about 7-8 ss a week - 4 stars.Story Development - Most of the chapters are just filler. For eg. in one chapter, its only about the MC riding on his monster to examination venue through a forest, the authority keeping an eye on these examinees and one very trivial/short comedy segment. Are 7 ss worth this? Next, the monster trainer/master does very little in a fight (doesn't have the ability to fight nor does he actively command his monsters) - 2 stars.Character Design - Very little characters other than the MC have an important role, and even those that can be considered important side characters are developed enough. MC himself is a brat, mediocre at best. He is not funny enough, nor smart nor serious. I feel the characters are seriously lacking or rather the author has been really lazy in writing them. - 2 stars.World Backgroud - Nothing new, very similar to Monster Paradise and other tropes. - 3 stars.All in all, very disappointing read for its current rating of 4.4. Excluding Translation quality and Stability of Updates (which is a solid 4 stars), this novel is utter trash. Only 2.3 stars.Monster Paradise is just so much better than this in so many places and levels, and that is after the fact that Monster Paradise isn't that great itself.
Bruh. Literally the author goddamn throws it straight at you no description at all just straight up throws a scene immediately at the first chapter. We all know that the mc will be talented but this though. I was expecting a sword path novel like Dominating Sword Immortal but thats just wishful thinking I guess. The rival is a 16 year old thats already past the Qi Condensation Realm and she's as strong as maybe Mid Reality Condensation or whatever the **** that 2nd realm is from DSI. Total horse **** as we'd know that the first places are always some backwater villages or some **** and not the capital so this is way too overbounds and also the pavilions and **** aint even ranked dude just described wtf this **** sucks dick bro