The story is basically a Japanese novel with an op cringe protagonist. It is honestly fun to read something like this again... I'm honestly tired from all the cold ruthless op MCs that can even hold their character straight... c'mon are you a ruthless or just edgy as fk. The author has said in the summary what type of story its going to be so I dont get why people are bitching about it beeing as it was described.Now onto the story itself. There are 2 problems that I have with the story. First one is the grammar. It is honestly not bad as some of the reviews might make you believe... since I have seen bad grammar. From which you just loose brain cells and there is a ton of those types of novels. This one is very much readable and the mistakes are minor and easily fixable. The mistakes also happen maybe once to three times a chapter... so not that often. Second would be the MC. He is not terrible since I wouldn't have read 20ish chapters if he was... but you have to make him grow somehow. I like the fact that he is cheerful but it's really annoying at how idioticaly he acts sometimes. Get him a skill that will calm him down a little bit so he doesn't embarrass himself. Showing lustful expressions just makes him look like a creep and even though it is sometimes funny... his character will defenitly get stale pretty quickly. Keep it happy go lucky but please make him realise that he should take things a bit more seriously and get himself a bit of a cool head (cool head in the terms that when he is excited he won't act like a kid and start shouting whooo! hoo! or accidentally make his mouth slip and stuff like that) Good Luck with your novel... though i think that the depressed "ruthless MC" loving audience on this website is not made for this novel. Sometimes I really see some of these comments and think if these people ever got some love in their lives? Like wtf...
was great but has now been dropped another update for 3 months and as usual no word from wn. as much as I do love the stories on this site the customer service is shocking. I would expect at least a tag or note that the story has been dropped.
So many grammatical errors and mismatching of the names. Definitely machine translated and poorly edited. How does this have 4.7 stars? Unbelievable.
This is a good novel I would recommend reading it(If its to your taste)The writing is of good quality there is few grammar errors here and there but it isn't anything major(Thank you author)Character development and world building was slow but it was at a comfortable pace(You know some novels go for 100-150 chapters to have a year pass with supreme pace(which i don't like)Thank you author for that)Updating is hectic but hopefully it improves from now onSo all in all it's a good read I like hope it continues like this and it improves with timePS:This review is after reading all 50 chapters
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I'm reading the manhwa of this and I want to read the story i more depth so I looked for the novel itself.
Not a bad read it was plot was well set up. that is all I could say , I manage to finish the trial read that means it is still pass to me. ,,.,....
Waste of time.Though it was have been good since it had so many reviews but I was wrong...................................................
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