Just overall a great novel, I’m on chapter 30 right now though and feel like we have been stuck in the training center forever, if we could have a time lapse maybe? I know you are trying to give Hera string abilities and don’t want those to pop out of no where but really the pace of the novel just is crawling. Having said that I just wanted to recons that based on my view point. I really like the world you have created!
interesting novel, but the protagonist invents a lot of excuses and nonsense to not get many women and get stronger faster, anyway, the author creates a lot of reasons or nonsense to make the protagonist grow up very slowly, any intelligent person would at least try reach the 5th or 6th realm of magic as quickly as possible to have the minimum strength to protect yourself, which are the intermediate realms, instead of taking the risk and betting that you will be lucky not to be attacked by someone. the author suppresses the protagonist too much so it becomes a boring romance 2/5⭐️.
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The story is so boring and looks like kids bedtime story that it makes me puke rainbows! Dropped at 26 chapter as I can’t take it anymore.Qu’Ali of writing is good with some mistakes here and there.Stability of updates I don’t know so I gave 5*Story development... There is none! It’s so boring that it hurts. Started ok and that was the best part of the story. They are just training and talking. No action except 5 sentences fight with demon at the beginning. Character are weak without personality, makes me even forget who is who as the author tries to give them different behavior styles but unsuccessfully.World background. Is it bad or good I don’t know. Author explains that there is a lot of discrimination from nobles and demons and war and orphans, but there is no hardship in the story! The worst thing the noble does is speak harshly to Demi humans. Everyone is happy, well feed and even orphanage looks like living in a hostel. No demons no fighting no killing. Basically everyone sings kumbaya while holding hands. They are even so nice that they tell their team configuration and strong points to their enemies...Waste of time.
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Hey man, really liked your book, I hope you can get back to writing it. I just found it the other day and couldn't stop reading. Really really hope you will post some more again soon. I do understand that life might have gotten in the way, but I hope you haven't stopped writing all together.
This is a Great novel that no questions asked gets my blood boiling everytime I read through it I highly recommend giving this one a read. :-D
This novel has a lot of potential. I believe that as long as it stays in this level of interesting things, it will be a very good so I hope the author will keep on the good work!
I enjoyed your sense of humor and the astral projection setup. RIP Kobe ?. One thing I noticed is you put plain when I think it’ “plane” unless that’ on purpose and I‘m an idiot. I’m the guy who replied on disc btw. looking forward to reading more chapters in the future.
poems are awesome but your writing is at another level like it is making me float between two timelines philosophy and reality...keep it up!!!
Very good series! I enjoyed reading it, and I expected it to honestly be cliche but boy was I wrong. This is one of my favorite novels out of your others. good pacing, very well written and good comedy lol