very interesting story!!!! already read it on faloo till chapter 60 If I could would've read all of it!i want to know more about dust, and how he uses silica.
The editing is soo bad, its unreadable. The story is nothing new. I get second hand embarrassment from the cornyness. 140140140140140140140.
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Pretty good. Just a few spelling errors. It was so fun to read and I cant wait for more! Author, get in gear and get to work so I can vote more on this epic work!
I Just want to say that if you are looking for a decent batman, its not in here. This batman has the brain of an imfant, along with the rest of the characters. Exampleflash:"can he be the Rider?" Batman:"highly unlikely because he said he hates violence on public TV" Ghost Rider apears where mc goes, so mc prepeares an excuse, What excuse you May ask? "Rider saved my life so I follow him everywhere and help cleaning up." which nakes no sense. Because acording to his excuse, Rider needs to appear somewhere and the mc comes. Yet mc is a world known figure so the news of him coming Should spread first. And then the Rider. So he either somehow knows where Rider will apear or its Just a lame excuse.
A well written vrmmo story that has a good mix of fun tropes without being heavy handed, and manages to keep a believable lucky idiot protagonist which doesn’t feel saccharine like some other stories.
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the lack of editing in this novel is disappointing.was such a niche genre. had all the potentials to be a gem but been riddled with the mass of people who likes to give opinions about mc all around him. a mashup of, young master cliches Mommy lying trough (whatever it means) the monsters are actually the most interesting part of this novel and make it unique among others. if it just cuts up the excess waste of fillers of every non-named NPC talks, it would have been a much better novel.I'll skim around for a few more to find that interesting part alone.
The ultimate doormat mc story.unfortunately, no matter how skilled and creative you are, it doesn't help you in making something amazing when you're digging a grave. which is what this story is.a big ol mass grave for everyone to throw their self esteem into.there are people who enjoy doormat stories, don't get me wrong, but I'm definitely not one of them.but this author takes it a step further than most doormat stories, the character is not only left with the usual near crippled physical abilities, but he has no ability whatsoever to even outsmart others or manipulate them or do any magic due to some story stuff.he's literally the perfect walking punching bag, and to top it all off, it seems like he improves FAR less than others in both looks and physical improvements. quite frankly, he starts off the story near the peak of what he can ever reach through improvement, effort, or luck, and that peak isn't even near the lowest ditch everyone else starts at.the title is an exact outline of how this story plays out so far. if you don't wanna read about a slave, then begone.but if you do decide to read, keep in mind that any beatiful words for high ranking things only apply to people other than the mc, if the mc gets something, it's useless without exception, aside from when it's a direct threat to his own life I mean.
I got to the end of the free chapters and I am furious spoilers start here. the main God who is supposed to be on the side of the right and just pardons one of the mid level gods and wants to restore them even though all they do is play with living beings and want them to kill each other where as the god of destruction is trying to create order but instead of having the mc told this and explained when he knows that his sister is filling his head with the wrong idea he takes a psycho under him to prevent the damage he expects? the train of events make total sense but the background main plot makes almost 0 sense except to say "self important goddess is more blind than her creations" troupe. I assume the protag ends up going against the main goddess with his defiance he earned from going against the Messed up mid god since that's all he got to keep from that long trip since everything else was tied in with the past through time manipulation. I have seen one other story like this and while fighting gods is always an interesting thing I have never seen it done in such a way that makes me furious before I am out of the free chapters lol. I may come back to finish this one but I am just so mad and can see that won't change for quite some chapters so I am taking a break.overall it is a good read I just can't continue at the moment because I want to slap so many characters right now.