The quality of writing is quite low, it almost seems as if the author doesn't read the chapters through for mistakes. There are probably 5-10 mistakes in a half page chapter..The chapters are very short and only contain one scene (almost) but with frequent releases.The story processes way too fast and doesn't really have a depth. It makes reading it very shallow.The other also forgets/neglects to explain many things until after the MC has put it to use. You don't get to learn why and how the MC knows the different things.Also the MC starts of with a personality of a 16-20 year old in the body of a 7 year old... it's just plain stupid and lazy writing of the author in my opinion.The characters are dull and already after a few chapters, it becomes apparent that they are fillers, even the family of the MC.The story probably had a lot of potential, but the author needs to develop a better beginning and background before I'd give the story another look.
