Zhen Xiu was thinking on her next plan. How will she torment her dear mother in law? After all, the proof she has now is not enough to send her for a long time in prison. She needs a good plan to subdue her and punish her.
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She let go of his arm and reeled in for a hard flat jab into his sternum. With her claws, if this was outside of the simulation, it would have broke through his flesh and caused a heavy puncture wound in his chest. However, seeing how this was all inside a training room, it had read back as a brutal blunt attack.
"That guy's cultivation was very strong and if I'm not wrong, then his strength should be very high as well. However, we don't know why he had deliberately suppressed his cultivation." Kitkat explained.
After staring at the weapon for a few short moments, Erika slowly reached for Blümelein before grasping it in her hands and checking that the chamber was loaded.
"Tony, what's the name of that person?"
"Calm down, I won't dare to do anything. Garbage like me still can't survive if I'm kicked out of this organization and has to survive alone out there," Lie said with a desperate voice.
After reading the first couple of paragraphs I can tell that the content of the original novel in Chinese uses imagery to great effect in the style of high fantasy. However from reading in English I can see that the person who is translating doesn't not do the subject matter justice. Writing in third person omniscient and using complex imagery is very difficult. We can see how the translator fell short, his is just doing the literal meaning translation instead without considering how the prose flows together in English. Instead we have a disjointed prose that jumps around presumably keeping up with the Chinese meaning but fails to live to the quality of the imagery or how the narrative flows. Please choose a translator that is a better writer
what a wonderful piece, I just can't wait for the updates
Really great book! It's easily the most intelligent story telling I've come across on this platform. I find this story, for most parts anyway, very compelling. All lovers of sci-fi should read this...Word of advice: Save ss and chapters for binge reading. If you don't, the cliff hangers might frustrate you.
Intresting i am going to add this to my Library
what a nice novel.