This is just really strange. It was hard getting into the story because it just doesn't make sense. The guy liked "building" things, which is fine. Unfortunately, he asks for a skill that lets him create anything. Right from the start, it's not building anymore. It's simply thinking of something, and it suddenly is there. In the first couple of chapters, he finds a little girl, takes her back to her village that was being attacked (taking a child back to potential danger), and waltzes into the village without a care and without the reader even knowing his thought process. The guy simply does it. Then, the villagers trust him without any real wariness shown except for the fact that the author stated that they were wary. He uses his "building" skill, talking all boisterous as if he has any real reason to feel pride or anything and moves on as if it's nothing. The story makes no sense, even at the start, which is the most important. The character is just overall quite strange already. The only real positive is the grammar and overall legibility of the story. You don't have to take my word for it, though. Just read the first couple of chapters. I also know the main thing people will say is, "You didn't give the story a chance," but the start is incredibly important. This start was rushed and genuinely just messy. Giving yourself multiple 5-star reviews is also just strange behavior. Take my review as you wish, if it's even left here.
Honestly one of the best urban novels I've read. MC is spy material but same times it's also realistic. Spy genre on webnovel should be much bigger.
This was an awesome book, definitely not what I'm used to since I prefer fantasy and romance. This is a Sci-fi, medieval twist based novel. Excellent writing and perfect description of characters. For a character who thought he was ordinary, wasn't so ordinary at all. Great book. Short and sweet and descriptive.
Another story from the shameless author but this shameless author's novels are always truly appreciable. l have read the given chapters nd so far it's a amazing story with as funny ML. Sad people should definitely give this a try(cough...not like other can't). So set ur seat belt nd get ready to read this nyaa~~ novel nd torturous life of ML becoz this author luv to torture his MLnya out~~(well kick this nya out?)
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Well...I don't know what to say other than this story is a grammatical nightmare. It's just...sigh. The premise is beautiful and I guess you can ignore the errors if you like it enough but...well. You really should work on your pronouns in particular. Just to clarify, for a woman is used /she/ and for a male /he/. Always. No exchange between the two can occour. Not only that, you also fill the chapters with unneeded info, throwing up facts left and right, making it a boring read. Is the reason why I only gave you 3 stars for world background. It's not that you did not develop it, it's just that...you didn't really fit it very well in the story. You should try to integrate your info more with the flow of the story, revealing smaller bits in more points. There is no need to dump everything on the readers at once, it only stops the flow and few people will read those added parts anyway (like i did) which is a pity.Aside from those points it's a beautiful story, I liked it. You probably should just think more about editing your chapters rather than postin them quicker, really.Anyway, I hope I didn't offend you with my comments and that instead they could be of some help to improve your writing style.
One of the best system type novel. The system is called super hatred system and it also has super hate points, so you can imagine how the MC is funny,cunning, ruthless, scheming. The only problem is that it has over 1500+ chapters in raw but only 23 translated.
Entertaining sports Novel. Really appreciating all the news updates and interviews which provide more insight and background to the story.Would like to see more character building and introduce 1 or 2 more characters to interact with MC. Flesh out MCs life outside the NBA and add a Friend that can go with him or increase Lawson and others roles. Since MC is from the Future have him talk to management about a couple of draft picks(1 or 2 allstars and role players). Hope to see 1 of his teammates from ABCD camp to get drafted to his team and he starts to develop his friendship with Brandon Roy, Iguodala and other nba players.
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good story although a little too gory for my taste it got me entranced till I reached the end. apart from a few typos that popped up the book was well done
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This book impressed me with the authors ease to dive into and smoothly describe action scenes. It gas a good phase, and pretty intriguing plot. Well done author! ?