ive got to say this is an amazing novel . i come across new novels quite frequently and not alot of them are good enough to make me continue to read. this is a great novel very unique . apart from a couple typos here and there the writung quality is magnificent. story development is ata good pace not too slow but not too fast either . character design is quite good my fav characters are du chan,xie mengyu and kim senior , hope you continue to update this story frequently it has massive potential and is already good anyway and the world background is definetly very interesting and well done
Looks good but I wish that other NPC mob was translated instead. Can't remember but it showed up here as well. He became a Final Boss and journeys a long with the Players and harasses them. It had a better summary!
I love this novel. At the beginning and throughout the story there are some terms that are foreign to me(to be expected when reading something with a foreign setting) but everything or at least most everything is explained after a little bit. Li Yun was an interesting character, I loved his development into the different career fields he explored and the development of him as a character as he goes from being a child into a young man that is in a romantic relationship with someone from a powerful background. I also love the way the romance was developed. It was subtle at times but then bam there was a chapter or nearly a chapter dedicated to the developing romance and it allowed for enough satisfaction brought from the sweet moments between Li Yun and his partner while also allowing the story to continue developing in the background. Most importantly though, I love the way the typical corruption was implemented and how it was resolved. Overall I loved this book, it sucked that the ending was so abrupt and left so many questions but it also leaves the reader with something to think about which I think is a great way of leaving a lasting impression on the reader. I heavily recommend reading this and hope anyone that does makes sure they persist to the end and enjoy reading!Thank you author for writing something so enjoyable to read I don't know if you are still active on this app but I just wanted to say thanks!Note: This story has no harem(I don't think this is a spoiler so I'm not going to label the review as such)
I read until the current chapter which is the 28 and so far I have loved this novel. Thank you for the good work! Send about 50 more chapters just for me to confirm something.
The plot is very interesting. The writing style is great. I loved the story.It drags you in more and more, hooking you to read on. Great story author. Good job
The thing which I liked the most about this novel is it's dialogues. There are lots of hilarious jokes and sarcasm inside plus even the neutral conversation seemed real, like one would actually talk like that in real life. The flow is smooth to read. Some editing definitely needs to be done, but for a new author this is a job well done. My favourite character as of now have been Stephan since he's so jolly and friendly.
Good author's work, excellent English. I will wait for the next chapters. Thanks for the work(yes, yes, I'm not verbose). Bb
No one is talking. Haha.. I'm bored.??????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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story is great and interisting but i hope you will get a Editor to make this more easy for the eyes.. ⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾