Love the whole story so please don't drop this. Although i said i will wait patiently for the next update but please don't forget about this story. You left this at a big cliffhanger =(
This novel has potential. The plot is fascinating and the author's writing skills is impressive. Can't get enough of it. Hope you guys check this out. Keep it up, Author. Hwaiting! ✊??
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it's really engaging if you love fantasy , adventure genre. The story gets better and better with newer updates and I'm really loving the main character :)Do check it out , fellow readers !
One of my favorite novels on the site. I decided to read it on a whim due to its name and was pleasantly surprised. The writing quality is pretty good with only a few mistakes and such. The stability of updates is the only thing I'm stuck on, but that's just because I want to read more of the story. Story development is really amazing and its nice how they haven't revealed what happens in the end yet. Character design is also amazing and I love the chemistry between the characters. World building is also really amazing with many unique tropes instead of just using overused cliches. Overall, amazing novel, highly recommend.
this book is a fabulous read! the writing is in point and the author's character sense is very good. A gem in the fantasy world! You will not be disappointed by this read. add it to your library now!
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Muito bom, ansioso pelo futuro dessa novel, ate agora tem sido muito boa .
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Your book isn't just nice. It's realistic. And books like that are hard to find these days since everyone seems to want to run away from reality. It also treats heavy subjects I think are mostly avoided. You definitely have a goal.
Hi! Author here leaving an honest review.I want to improve my writing because I knew this is mediocre and I want to make it better.I use too much exposition and find that I can’t write good conversations. there will probably be a lot of inconsistencies because as much as I try to note down all of the information that I use (seriously I have like 16 pages of notes for like the first 30-40 chapters) I will inevitably forget something.Pls give your suggestions on how I should improve, I take criticism well so do your worst.(P.S I will write a chapter ever 1-2 weeks and I should have around 2k words per chapter, no promises to either of those though *teehee*)
Can the protagonist be like very feminine or very beautiful face...and have a female slender body structure but without the female genitalia parts...I’m weird pls kill me...I lie yaoi too btw...