I'm caught up with Translation. It’s very similar to Game Market 1983. And a better version of the Prodigal System. The author has built up the story extremely well and a good cast of characters.It’s all well thought out, no wonder it’s popular in China. However, it's easy to imagine this getting quite repetitive. All MC does is try to fail, make games,face-slap. All a cycle. Conclusion: The best Business CN. But that's all. All that’s missing is some good romance. Honestly, it’s just the story feels too perfect that it’s missing something. Author really teased us with the hot secretary.
Your style is different from the novels I read since it doesn't have a lot of prose. The writing style you have is not bad and is actually it is easy to understand. It is good and easy to read, and the flow of the story is good also. I probably got used to reading old fashioned novels or format but it does not matter. There is a lot of reference too that I can relate, especially in the first few chapters. It really did crack a smile on my face and is really entertaining. My verdict for the story is 4.6/5.0. I noticed some minor mistakes in capitalization and spelling but proofreading and some edits can fix them. It's a good story in overall and please do not give up writing. I find it a good read and entertaining at the same time.Thank you for reading this review!The TradeMaker