Give me the full name and birth date of the person that have picked this novel I'm going to curse him with a voodoo doll for a week for the immense waste of my life I have done reading 4 chapters of this novel
Copy and pasted my original review sue meIt's a very well written story so far. The writing quality is excellent for someone who's first language isn't English.The stability of updates seem to be good from the dates posted on the chapters, only time will tell though.The story development so far is interesting, definitely very catching as your first read it simply because the character seems more down to earth and isn't straight up gung-ho as other stories of this nature seem to be when things first starts. Hopefully the character will adapt to the world yet still retain his core values from earth and possibly even try to integrate these values into the world over time, instead of just saying **** it and giving in to the regular values of the cultivation world and simply abandoning the values of a modern day earth.The character design could use some more in depth personality description and history, such as flashbacks to memories that help to shape him to be the person he is and show much more accurately why he makes decisions the way he does.The world background is pretty much ok,but it presents the opportunity for much more complex world building as the story progresses as the character himself knows very little of the world he is so far.Overall, the story is well written, has seemingly stable updates; quality story development; character design that,while could use some improvement , is presently pretty good,and world background that has enough room for it to be developed and designed so as to be complex and very interesting.Hopefully, the author takes a route where the character would try to integrate modern earth values through perhaps a seemingly quirky yet solid character that strives to, while not being a bleeding heart hero like superman or all might, improve the world in a realistic yet simple thought process, such as the 'pay it forward' philosophy where one kind act can repaid by paying it forward to another unfortunate individual as well as implementing a modern day earth practices such as basic education institutions like primary schools, secondary schools, tertiary schools and universities in a effort to unite people under a single banner rather than fractured into different clans and sects that hoard knowledge like a miser hoards money. Just a thought, otherwise do you author and let the haters go **** themselves.
First time bothering to rate a novel on this website, so far the story is great but the only thing that’s bringing it down is the story lacks explanations like what's body tempering pearl, why did he get sealed, why and how he got body tempering materials so easily in a cruel cultivation world, the character accepted it without asking/thinking about why he got sealed and how does he know how to unseal his meridians and idk how to fully explain it but the story needs background info, it only says he is 4 and he gets sealed after his test but nothing about where he came from..... I can add more stuff but I think you get the point. As long as these stuff get added in the story will be perfect. Edit: that was a comment before i saw the stat numbers -_- too unreasonable like I Eat Tomatoes novels except it starts at the beginning of the story, initially i gave it a high rating but lowered it because of this but i still think the story has potential if the author is reasonable with how op the main character is, the stats might be reasonable at the end of the novels but not at the beginning of the story unless the author just uses big numbers but it doesn't equal to that much power, but still if that were the case the numbers are just crazy. One of the main reason i read cultivation novel is because i want to see character progression and adventure. I like the bloodline and transformation idea would be nice if the author makes the transformation actually his main body since there are too many novels out there that use transformation as superficial cultivation technique and at the end human body strength is greater than the transformation version. I am still going to read on and see if things improve or the author can make things work with how things are and change my rating based on that. Overall you just gotta make the power system more meaning full rather than just too op and need more background detail, and hopefully the story doesn't focus on women too much because i often see author use that as an excuse to make a ton of filler chapters. I know author is 13 and you already have a great framework for a very great story but the author still has a lot of learn, and don't take offence but this is my honest opinion after reading 100+ cultivation novel. If you can fix and incorporate everything i said using the same idea that you already have then this will be in my top 5 novel list. You also have to know that after reading all these novels now days most novel feel too repetitive to me and the only reason i am writing this comment is because this doesn't. So i hope you improve your story and before all this i hope the story doesn't get dropped which usually tend to happen. I think your story has similarities with 'Warlock of the Magus World' so might want to check that out and 'Swallowed Star'. Swallowed Star author also tends to use big numbers like you so by the time you finish his novel you will be annoyed to look at numbers, they loose their value... and he also tends to ruin the story at the end in all of his novel by getting rid of their uniqueness like bloodlines/special power and stuff.
I LOVE IT!!!???????Keep keep writing author-san! looking forward for more?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌???????????????????????
I just refreshed the page and the ratings went up 2 stars LMAO??? Bye Bye 1 star reviews I am going to laugh some more to hit character count???????????????????????????????????
This book gets better and better every time I read it my only real complaint is that there isn't more for me to read in the first place I mean I don't enjoy the fact that almost every woman he meets seems to want to have sex with him after knowing him for less than an hour but it's honestly gotten a lot better since around chapter 20 ish
I made an account just to post this review and that's saying something.It started good until the author started forcibly filling up the story with identity politics and lbgtq alphabet bs. I'm stopping here at chapter 187. I was here to read about a story of an old man who spends his retirement inside a video game not to read about identity politics, Twitter is already filled with that bs
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One of the best Web Novels I have had the privilege of reading. I am hooked but thankfully the author has a very generous release schedule . Even though its the authors first web novel it reads really well and the quality keeps improving as the story progresses. I have high hopes that this novel will prove as a good example that English authors can also create top notch webnovels and one day be translated to Chinese :D
This is one of the only eastern fantasy cultivation novels I have enjoyed so cheers to the author for doing such a great job. Would love to join the discord to lurk and refer to pictures of the characters as I continue reading but every link I find for the discord is expired. if someone or even the author if they have time could get me a newer link that would be greatly appreciated ? P.S. I love all the little sweet moments between kai and his women that pop up outside of the sax stuff, please keep that going! ?
It's more of a comedy, than anything else. However, it's very enjoyable as one. I'd be happy to read more.The translation isn't perfect, but I'd say the errors are tolerable.
Very different and unique book with very good realistic villainous character. writing quality very high, suspense plus story build up and background is very interesting. characters arw written properly not giving the idea that they are forced or 2d.