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The Water nation's capital city is situated on a big Island that surrounded by water in every direction. in the middle of this huge island, there was a grand building which was much bigger than any other stood proudly.
Name: Spirit Bangle
"Hey, are you trying to provoke me! I, your father, also have game Stigma!... But we'll discuss that in a later date. Just as I said, you can't leave at this time because its dangerous, its the 'Dark Hour' right know and it's not safe for kids your age to move around."
and thus the misery of the poor dressers started, rip the bastards!
When I read about them using a black hole as a power source. I was like what the **** why? You have the technology to make a fucking black hole you use it as an energy source. And dont let me get started with it connecting earth and moon together I mean why won't it just swallow everything in the solar system? I have no problem with sci-fi novels I read swallowed star and super gene my problem is when they try to be "scientific". When people read this they might think ow a black hole can be used as a power source hmmm. Why not a giant antimatter factory its still possible. But this just makes drop it instantly swallowed star has extraterrestrial super beings. Super gene goes for the multiverse they both tackle the things that we know little about. but we no a lot about black holes and what it does and it is definitely not source of energy its more like it pulls things in orbit. Maybe if they use a white hole it would have been more belevable. Ps. for those who will say that we dont know anything about what happens inside a black maybe thats where the energy is. BOI IF YOU HAVE THE TECHNOLOGY TO POKE AROUND EVEN AT THE SURFACE OF A BLACK HOLE THAT CAN LITERALLY PULL THE FUCKING ATOMS IN A MATERIAL WHY WHOULD YOU FUCKing NEED TO BE AFRAID. The MATERIAL THEY USED MUST BE AT THE LEAST BE INVINCIBLE TO ANY PHYSICAL DAMAGE. AND WHATS THE POINT OF THE STORY THEN?
The reason why I think this is the best novel in Qidian is :- This one has a lot of twist. You can't ever predict it- This one can make you cry like a child (damn ninja cutting onion), but it can also make you laugh like a crazy girl ?- The author is simply genius (The world building and character development make you wonder what kind of brain that our godly author has ?)- Each chapter is not some useless filler like any other novel. It build the novel like a brick and cement. Sometimes you will laugh out loud, sometimes you will laugh while crying- Roland. Yep. He is the reason this novel is superb. Praise Master Angry squirrel for creating him. The MC is not your average crazy lich. He has a lot of identity and his past can make you cry. His anger, his grief and misery, his love for his people and all of his imperfect personality make you fall in love with him. The more you read each chapter, the more you fall for him. Even the villain, cannon fodder, mob chara, family, friends (the gentleman ?), and all of the girl who fall in love with him has a really good character setting. They has reason and not you 2D chara. Basically, I Love all of them (correction : I love this novel as much as I Love Overlord)- B**feng (His name is one of the 7 taboos in this world. Ehm. Don't ask me why i love this trouble maker gentlemen ?)Well, if you find this novel is tempting enough for you, just read it. Don't wait any longer or you will find yourself like me. Regretting why i didn't read it sooner ??P.S : I am not a gentleman just because i support B**feng ?
This web novel is great. I rarely write reviews because of my bad English but I want to write a review of this novel. 1. Writing Quality - Writing Quality is Good there are some mistakes and it too improves as story progress. But the main problem lies in understanding who said what. I mean, for example, there is "I know it's you who did this"written But no explanation said this you need to guess who said that but thankfully this rarely happens and you can read this without spoiling your reading experience.2. Character Development - Character development is one of the main points for me in reading this novel and writing this review. Both ML and FL personalities develop as the story progresses. Anna grows from a narcissistic, Self Center, arrogant, Selfish young master type person to a kindhearted person who helps others Although change is this big it's not forced and understandable. There too are some problems like Anna acting childish even though she is returne and Noel's hate seems somewhat fake and forced but overall it's great. 3. Update stability - Too good to be true.4. Characteristics - Noel - Kindhearted but if you give him the option to choose between his life or an innocent person's life he definitely chooses himself, Smart person, perfect for an ML. Anna - A little dumb and childish but perfect for FL.
An okay story, grammar and sentence structure needs a lot of work
Daffodils here ʘ‿ʘI'm gonna give my book a five star cause that's what it deserves
This the best Dragon novel I have ever read... After this I also tried other novels of the author those are not bad but this one sets the standard really high... It's my personal bias but I would like the author invest more in this novel as a reader and a Dragon enthusiast...
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I really like Lyra and I am curious on this essence abilities is there more information about it? Also, what is Sanguine? IS it a type of Vampire all other i like the story but it can better if you flesh out each character better
