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Ah man.. good story.. you have marvelous background story.. path of beast king.. make sure you make great story.. because if you are not make good story.. you will make the background suck.. overall this is great.. and this like game that I know.. with nickname that normal and not like poetry in Chinese vrmmo novel
A refreshing new novel i have started to read. Have seen some of the old man reincarnated/transmigrated etc. This one doesn't seem like a maniac. Going to keep reading this book. Keep up the good work!
Already from the beginning, it feels a lot like Scum Villian's Self Saving System and Everyday the Protagonist Want to Capture Me, and I'm loving it so far. Can't wait to see how it differentiates from other transmigration novels and where the story goes since there's only 2 chapters out. Keep up the good work!
Great! The way it was written is just great. It's like riding a bus of questions. Be they words or characters. Be they events or the readers. All will search for answer. This book is quite similar to Moriarty the Patriot, I like it. Great job madame. Do keep on writing and updating~
This is the kind of story i liked.call it bias or whatever..i hope the writer can get back to the story at hand and continue giving chapters
This novel was amazing. I love ecah of the cuaracters. My favourite was Cana. I also loved the development of Yamato's character from being a weak and unreliable guy to the strong man that he is now. 10/10. It's a must read.
A new reader here, recommended by my friend. Like the concept of universe. Always enchanted by mystery. Can't wait for the new chapters!!! We need more books like this.
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This could be such a good novel if it wasn’t filled with unnecessary info-dumps, there are so many details that nobody cares about! In this novel there is an interesting story and the author knows what he he writing about and on Webnovel this is quite rare, but the story is so filled with info-dumps that it becomes too slow and boring. It should be entirely rewritten and all the chapters should have at least half the length, and the story would be still slow. All of this without considering the bad grammar that makes the reading process even more exhausting.
OK I like this book I do first the most glaring yet smallest problem :English you need to go back and edit your work you are improving clearly but the early chapters were so atrocious I almost gave upSecond it's been less then a month that's not as much time as you seem to think people have to kill hundreds if monsters a day to reach that lvl you would have to spend zero time looking only one fight after the next never taking more then a minute it's so stupid and then it's repeated by many people let's be consultative and say 100 have level 20 by chapter 50 three or so weeks in 15-16000 monsters killed meanin a million or so monsters in month in an unknown environment with bodies that are contantly changing I mean if you are five times stronger you would have to learn to walk again after all its not a gradual change so martial arts would have to be relearned over and over muscle memory would be completely useless because you'd need a different amount of strength for the same result maning your muscle mom or would have to adapt with every level that would mean many hours of practice for monthsThird pacing 10 or so chaps of hunting rabbits then he gets dragon blood meets a weird monster and gets the love intrest I know there is a narrative reason for that but that doesn't make it an any worse a choice from a writers perspective spread those events out with the monetonous grinding chapters So chapter 55 the Mc let's himself be surrounded instead of idk moving attacking talking strip down kissing his own ass good bye literally anything.this is not the onlytime he is stupid The final problem I have with is with 55 specifically the Mc is bound by rope tied to a stone have you ever used this wepon seen it used in real life anything I thought no because if you had you would relize there is no reason for that rope to stay wrapped around his leg the most you could is a stumble before it just before it just gets pulled back it's like binding some one with an untied rope it makes no senceI liked that you are trying focus on the people a bit not a harem also a positive trying to focus on her personality your English is improving I'm not as good about saying positive stuff I wasn't trying to be vitriolic in this review an hope I wasn't to rambaley and incoherent
Well this is my sugestion for you :Good side :- Interesting character- Easy to readBad side : a bit spoiler- I dont get it why the MC is so rash and softie. I feel it become contradiction because actually he is smart and have strong wisdom that how the story line tell us.- I dont know how to say this mmmmm...that the story say he have character merchant but he lose so much.- He doesnt know politic, but still fooling around with noble. (I feel like crying now trust me.)Well the think make this bad because contradiction for what actually the MC do and the story line say. So, I mean example if he is hot blooded, he will love fight and easy get angry but if we make the contradiction that line become like this "He doesnt love to fight and calm person". Well this is still just my opinion but actually this story have well background but the story line sometimes tell us the spoiler, you can say that I more like doesnt know because it will have more surprise and we can feel the helpless side in MC.