The world building is steady. No unnecessary characters have been introduced until now and all of the characters seem to be relevant. Nice work.
This is not a power fantasy novel. He's already an apex predator, it is however a massive upgrade/training novel with some empire building mixed it. Try it if you're on the fence about the novel. It will make you cry, it'll make you fume in anger, and that's good. Because ***feeling*** is what it's all about.
So thankful to have a great ending to The King Avatar. While I'm upset that some of these characters retired too early!!! Why!!! How could they!!!! But I'm very pleased to read about the ending :) Thank you
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Easily the best novel out of all the one's currently in their trial period. I really hope this gets picked up.Easily the best novel out of all the one's currently in their trial period. I really hope this gets picked up.
The story is about a reincarnated boy from earth in a futuristic world with beast taming. Mc finds a system that is like a hyperbolic time chamber but it is another world.The story seems to be good but the characters seem to be 1 dimensional but the most off putting thing is the grammar. The grammar is so bad that it seems the author doesn't know MC's main gender. Author if you have seen this please fix Mc's gender.
A hidden gem, a genius teenager and an average man that was trained to be a badass and lived his life serving his country as an agent, fused together to become an even bigger badass.He wants to be known by his knowledge and intelligence but his life started to revolve around showbiz.He doesn't have a system nor cheat that would help him be famous straight up (i.e given acting skills / singing skills), he also didn't go back in time to steal other's works. But with the fused genius and badass agent's abilities, he could push through any obstacles.This is very much worthy of 5 star imo, but I'll leave it with 4.5, there are minor spelling mistakes or mistakenly using homonyms, but that could be easily fixed by simple editing.The author also did great by staying away from most clichés. It stays unique. And you wouldn't be grinding your teeth from reading almost the same sh*t over and over despite reading different books.
This is amazing! Though the grammar is kinda bad. The story is amazing! It needs to progress a bit slower and a bit more detailed. Less filler and more main story. Give it a bit of a twist. Not just the typical mmo with sex. Make it unique. This is the most addictive novel ive read. Even without r18 sceens and just harem and honest mc. This novel would still be amazing. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️????
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Story started really nice.MC was a legendary player in the game before... Now he is in the game, but not legendary any moreThis not legendary any more gets mentioned quite often. But EVERYTHING he does is only possible because he is legendary...His silver strength is meaningless, because he can slay groups of silver fighter easily (without weapons or armor, btw). The gap between silver and gold strength is enormous. Tomorrow a gold strength enemy will arrive... no problem, as I can easily defeat him, because I was once a legendary player (honestly?)I stopped reading, as the 'I am not legendary, I just can do legendary stuff' was just too much for me...
Translation is BAD (su*cks a lot) after ch. 40.I've read a few of the chapters and they don't get better. The story is really good but the translation ruins it all.