Kelvar10AKE
Every chapter after 87 is privleged. I'm not paying stones for the "privlege" of paying the translators paycheck.Unless you want a paywall don't read this.
I can’t get past chapter 8 without trying to throw my phone at a wall. The translation is so far average, the way the sentences and words are constructed somewhat threw me off. The story development and character design is as cliche as it could get. The first few chapters are a copy of the most generic CN novels you could find. And I mean it. The author literally just change the name of the characters, the world, and the continents. If you’ve read enough CN novels you’ll know how the world background progress.
Ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun ling Yun I am expecting from the author to release more chapters
Although I know it’s a good novel but I will not read any novel in trial read until it get pick by the translater. I’m tired of reading novel but later knowing that it won’t get translated further.
Eu não gosto do mundo de MHA . Eu estava entusiasmada para ler uma fanfic do Reinhart . Mas ele foi logo para esse mundo??____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It's a pretty good story, I guess. By no means the best, but it is really good at certain points. The characters at first felt like boring cut outs, but as it progressed they got a lot better. One thing I like about the story, is when the characters interact. The cast all flow well together and that is my favorite part of the story. This story doesn't have an amazing plot that will wow you, it doesn't have super deep characters, but what it does have is, some cool superpowers, (looking at you Kitsune) and some fun characters.
Nice story. Good writing style. Story development is little bit poor. Characters are good. Scenes are not properly explained. Many times skipped.
The story is good so far.. Writing Quality: There isn't much to complain about. Character Design: It's okay imoWorld Background: It's good also. Update Stability: 1 chapter a day. Story Development: Going at a good pace currently, again imo My Rating: 4 stars, but I'll give the author a 4.6 stars rating to encourage him. Recommendation: I'll advise you read it as it is a great story imo. Also if the first chapters are disappointing to you, I suggest you read till about chapter 40 before you decide if you want to drop it. The first chapters aren't really that good imo, but the book started getting better for me at about chapter 30 or so. Also there are some places I personally feel the author didn't execute properly, but since he's new, I'll give him the benefit of the doubt. If you check my write up you'll see I put imo in most of the places because they are my opinions. My thoughts are different from what you'll think about the book. Read it... Only then will you know if it's good.
Isekai. A dumb protagonist, who hopefully will wise up. A system of cultivation in place. Overall, this makes for a slow burn in terms of pacing, but I expect the developments, character-wise and plot-wise, to become better and better.
Really good start, keep at it stumbling! So far so good.The author definitely did not ask for the review. Hehe. Seriously though, give it a read.
Nice cover
so proud i love the story
