Friends, do you know the kings avatar? I do. It is the glory of my lifetime. I'm looking forwards to meeting Ye Xiu's mentor! Trust in master butterfly, he delivers.
I don’t know who is translating this novel but they are doing a very poor job at it. They forget to delete already translated scripts and when they do translate they mess up the names of things or the flow or the words is butchered.
An example would be how the changed Constitution to Physical Strength, and Agility to Agile. They already had strength as an attribute why are they trying to confuse readers with two of the same words for different things.
Another example is how when explaining that an item would drop on death they said, “a task item that fell 100% dead and could only be taken away alive” also, do they even play games? It’s a quest item not a task item.
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I have to praise the author since he pulled me into a high fantasy world where the magic system is interesting. It was slow pace at start then later it picked up on the rhythm.
I also like the quotes at the beginning of the chapters.
There were just minor grammatical errors such as missing periods, and comma were being used instead of period. But thi can be fixed later on.
Keep up the good work!
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I personal love bl so please add more with smut in it oh please wor on grammar.................................................................................................................................................
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This novel is Great and the mc has a consistent personality with him being evil although I say the cultivation is sometimes a little to fast with him getting to the next level in 2 chapters. Also, this is novel doesn't have a harem or any romance.
overall below average novel. MC got lucky in character creation and is totally OP. there is no some great world background, nor any good character interaction. so far it is full of VR novel cliches and if you take any novel in that category there is more than 50% chance that it will be much better than this one. also contains racism, so i changed it from 2 stars to 1 star.
The story is going well and now we have daily updates. The character development seems fine while the plot is somewhat unique. I hope you don't drop it
Awesome! I didn't think such an awesome take for the video game genre could exist, very well done author. It's like Digmon and Matrix gave birth a child, lol. Good work!