I really like the story, well thought out, only thing that annoyed me in the beginning was the im going to hide my power but that changes so now we good
Great book! Incredible story. I recommend this book for everyone, as long as you can read. ' I'm Black and I'm proud" is one of the best book I've read in a while.
truly riveting read even early on in the story
Well, Harem most of the times is a big no from me, as memories of [Castle of Black Iron] is still fresh when few of the MC girls wanted to leave and it stings straight in the heart. Till c380, Worry has handled in a mixed way(maturely and immature both) but I'm satisfied somewhat. Not sure why I talked about the above stuff but wanted to vent somewhere after reading the novel. It's not about the novel but emotions which got sturred while reading it. The most attractive highlight of the novel to me will be emotional and physical fulfillment between couples. Most of the times novels tends to one side more than the others but Worry has maintained a delicate balance between them and I hope it never happens.Good Work and Keep up the Passion ???
It's quite good so far, though the story has not started yet, but the pacing and writing are quite good.keep it up author ? and what about the update schedule author???
I am enjoying to read more. Alex is sweet and smart to not friend with his bullies who talked about Alex, "poorest loser". I didn't like his bullies but I love to see they will open their mouth on a ground when they will see Alex is a millionaire now.
After reading a few chapters of the book, I decided to put the book down. My main criticism is that the writing style feels slightly elementary. There are times when the past and present tenses are used right after each other in the same paragraph which takes away from the story’s emersion. Also, I personally didnt like how the main character seems slightly one dimensional. I havent read far, but the character doesn’t seem to have any substance. However, I would still give the story a chance, because you may like it.
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This is a fairly well written story, except the girl who is probably going to become the female lead is very annoying and it would be better to make her have less interactions with the Mc. Not all stories need romance in them.
Very nice..... More chaps pls....... Can you do the D.I.C.E world after this...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I shall praise the author for delivering such fine story and characters focusing not only on supernatural phenomenons but with deep care on exploring martial art as well as cultivation.
Surprising for me was the growth for both the main and secondary characters, his friends, who are well fleshed out and support as well as drive him in his adventures.
The flow of the story seems natural and you will not find any major time lapses. Most of the plot, as of chapter 151, takes place in almost real time with a slighly different Tokyo as the background.
Romance, as light as it seems to be so far, is present although it is only one sided from one perspective as it could be found in other japanese or asian novel with the main character focusing on his objective rather than the other gender.
Thank you for reading this review and I hope you will enjoy this novel at least as much as I did, if not more. Take care :-). Cheerio !
Yo author, im gonna try this novel, i know you from the achievement junkie, it is one of the best novel in webnovel i guess, i believe this will have the same quality with your other novel as well. Nice grammar, interesting background, good story development.