FictionalJack
Review by author.
Well, more than a review it's a note for interested readers.
What u can expect:
1. A story with action
2. A setting with power as a core value
3. MC in conflict with his own system
4. MC going from strong-weak-strong
5. An ambitious MC with equally interesting side characters
6. A serious tone unlike my previous works
7. A good plotline
What you shouldn't expect:
1. Mindless s*x, yeah there is going to be smut but it is only to help progress the story.
2. Complicated philosophies.
Holy cow, this is amazing. The worldbuilding, the characters, the development, this story is awesome. I’m on the edge of my seat and the main characters aren’t even in the game yet. This is a wonderful story, and I can’t wait for more.
Unique perspective on post apocalypse type novels with blacksmithing class. Initially didn't have any expectations but now I've been surprised. The system and blacksmithing itself is cool. Currently the story is still new but very good in my opinion
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Read the first chapters and i am intrigued- the writer did an excellent job to get a reader hooked right into the story. The plot caught my eye and I am curious about the main characters. I think this was a great read!
Great story, Story opening of the story is really amazing ! ? plots, characters and settings are engaging really well. My favourite chapter is 25 and my favourite character is Samsara. I loved this novel. Keep up the good work Author ???.
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Dari judul novel saya kira menarik dan saya langsung membacanya tidak membaca sinopsis dulu, Hufff ternyata cerita tidak sesuai yang saya bayangkan dari chapter 1 hingga 17 saya belum menemukan hal yang menarik, biasa saja huff
nice story. better than the novels in same genre.one player in each country is a great twist. i like intelligent protagonist in this story who does not brainlessly give away everything. pls update more chapter.
the story and the concept is interesting the imagination of the author is wonderful the narration goes well with the characters and story but there were few grammatical, tense errors I hope the author have fixed those in the Futher chapters overall amazing story good work author
it's a slow pace story but when you get the hang of it then it is the best of any novel you have read
