This story needs editing very very fast!!! There are so many grammatik errors, that althou you can sort of understand what thr meaning is, its just not a fun read. So please author get someone to edit the chapter or just rewrite the whole thing because the story is just not that good.P.S.: if you delete this review im just gonna make another one
It was going good at beginning but later parts just makes you work your brain not to feel stupid lol. No fixed cultivation style; magic, qi, then science, underworld and even Norse mythology lol and it just keeps going.
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I already read through the first few chapters and I am hooked. The way the author writes is almost poetic as it flows seemlessly and lyrically. The synopsis drew me in from the start and I cannot wait to find out what happens next. I highly recommend this novel to anyone. Kudos to the author. Great work!
Nooooo!!!! He was finally going to explore.....I love your fanfic now this novel with the same MC ofcuz I want more...Plz come back!!!( plz update BOTH )
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This book is just WOW. AMAZING. I've always been a fan of action and thrillers. I was literally at the edge of my bed. This is a serious page turner. I need more. Give me more.
Definitely an amazing read, everything from the plot to the writing style captivated me. It's definitely a unique story. Therefore, I'd like to request the author to update more!! It's too captivating!!
The sorry has a different feel.The plot is intricately designed, the background of each scene is well described too.The author has put a lot of effort in the creation of this novel, i can assure you that.
Reading this really gives me hope to some degree :D For most of the time I was worried after reading for either the various major problems the writers have in their works or the pity of knowing that the book is too niche to be appreciated on WN even with its good quality. Now I finally encounter something that has originality, quality AND the potential for contract and commercial success (at least on this website), the world seems much brighter XD.It is just a wild guess but I feel like the writer is from an English-speaking country or at least familiar with it in daily life, for the way he organizes words is natural, easy-to-understand and rather colourful, whereas the novel itself is written not in a typical western literature style, but like a Japanese RPG in my opinion--I was constantly reminded of games like Zelda and Final Fantasy series when I read the plots and the way the author presents his world and characters. Not to say he's borrowing stuff from them, of course--the world settings and plots are very original--just a bit similar in styles.The only thing I can ask the writer to do is to further refine his writing style and the presentation of characters and world-setting through practice, though they are not some problems that would sound a alarm and damage my reading experience, simply something that would make an already good piece even better. For example, though I do love the colourful simplicity of writer's language (if you can convey the same thing in a more reader-friendly way, why use those riddles? :p), some usage of language (in my opinion) is a bit too "casual" for literature work, and the author will really need to practice to connect the bits of narratives and the parts about MC's thoughts in a smoother way--right now I always feel a little bit out of the place when the pov switched from "he" to "I" :pOther than these two problems I would say the quality of the book is quite mature, just some more vivid, small details (emotions, facial expressions and gestures) can maybe make the characters more vivid, and try to scatter the info about world settings in a more fragmental fashion throughout the story. The plots are progressing in a very good pace and tbh if it weren't for me being too busy writing my own book I would really just go on and finish it XD.In fact, though I act all cynical and contemptuous to contracted writers in usual occasions, I actually encourage the author to try and win a contract (if it is a good one) with WN after he reaches the 50K-words requirement (if the editor hasn't spotted him yet before that), because the book is both worthy and very easy for the majority to appreciate, so it should be well above the standard of WN contracted works based on my understanding :DStill, should that time comes, the author is welcome to come to me for advise. I've been doing this for years now so I would have a general idea of whether the salary they are proposing is reasonable and the contract terms are good etc.. Best of luck on that, author∠( ᐛ 」∠)＿
The pace of the story is super super slow. The story will be nice in the beginning(upto something like chapter 270) but gets disgusting as it goes on. The the MC also turns into one of those lucky b@stard only found in trash novels. This less than clever MC gets into very very sh*tty situations due to lack of cleverness , proper planning and carefullness but still comes out safe and sound because he is the "lucky b@stard".MC has a lot of plot armour(no more matter what crap he does he will remain the superb). I read upto 600 charpters in the raw and the MC is still not an official wizard. If you want to read this novel because you are a fan of "warlock of the magus world
This a really good novelHave a lot of potential ___________________________________________________________________________________________________