This limit thing is dumb, really makes spam be the more likely approach, anyway.The writing in itself is not bad, didn't see many mistakes if any, the rest is the problem, relationships turn from 0 to 100 real fast, a few hours change everything, didn't help to give depth to characters or make said relationships compelling.The Story is somewhat awkward, the development until the point I read didn't appeal to me and was kind of beaten down by how poorly I felt the relationships developed.The characters seem one dimensional, without depth and completely passive to the world around them, "Oh okay I accept being the support of thirty different people in a setting with real danger and with little to no real benefit besides getting a fiance that fell in love with me at first sight." c'mon, I know how plagued by such things the Isekai genre is, but generally, the typical protagonist is not given a choice he's just suddenly in another world and is screwed, this one made a choice, for me it was the wrong one.Finally, the world or worlds were simply not described, left entirely to the imagination of the reader, it'll already be a challenge in and of itself to make dozens of legitimately compelling worlds, not even bothering to describe them will not help.This story is clearly being written by a beginner author, so let me give a little advice, plan a little ahead, give time to your characters to develop themselves and their relationships, and invest in the world you are creating if you want people to like your story. You don't need to describe the texture of the pebble by the side of the road, but what I'd like to know is, how is the school, how do the characters look, do they have a uniform, does the clairvoyant old man have a huge beard, does the bro-con princess have amber eyes?
Story is pretty good and fresh Unique start with Mc an Fmc with incest I like it’s nice but I feel like the story progresses a bit too slowly besides the h-scenes n training a lil slow plot I don’t mind that but this guy acts like a rat so much for being a dragon dude won’t take no risks an I bet if his cultivation was high he still wouldn’t expose himself scared to die when they on a world with low cultivation which makes me not like parts of this novel makes him stand out as a *****
FWKKKKKKKKKK Why did I bother reading trial reads!? They're stupid! Now I need to wait like 2 months to actually read this book! ARGHHHHJHDFI8EH3O8FFIJ8HEJFFUENEO89
Looks fun to read. It's nice to see an actual fantasy setting instead of another isekai novel. Keep up the good work, hopefully your novel will get really popular!
Phenomenal! I drank the story with how well it flowed! Great plot, great characters, amazing scenes, and great concept! I enjoyed it heavily. I am just sad that I didn’t discover this later so I could’ve binged it.