What can I say this is getting a 5 stars from me as it is my favourite type of genre and has a lot of my favourite aspects to read in a novel, you have me hooked to see where this novel leads I will be here for the long run keep them coming Amanasci
I really loved reading this story! The characters and world building are some of the best I've seen in this genre. Unfortunately I read the whole thing in a week and the last update was over a month ago. Hopefully updates pick up a bit.
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I can see that this is happening like a original cultivate novel where some thing bad or trade happens and they get something good like a system or a artifact that can change there life. First of all why can't the parents not died it almost happens on every single novel so the Main character can be independent.
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Hmm, reading this first chapter, I can see the potential of this novel. The author has a decent way of portraying the story and the worst thing to say about this novel should be the cover. Something more exciting or more eye-catching will retain more reader's to click and try this novel out.
there are a lot of things i like and a lot i dislike about this novel i'll start with likes as bullet points-the MC is smart and decently strong and stays pretty strong throughout-i really like the shamelessness of the MC its really funny-the chapters are really long it feels well thought out so while it says over 1000 chapters you really get a lot for that 1000+negatives-everything has a story and the author must tell you the story of everything(example: theres a guy about to stab the MC with a sword, it goes and starts talking about the guy, who he is, what his childhood till this point was like, what he likes and dislikes and why you should care about him. then it talks about the backround of the sword what it likes and dislikes why you should care about it and how cool of a sword it really is. you can actually skip 10+ chapters in most of the fights and come back with the sword still about to stab the MC)-filler plot. he loves to tell you on the spot why things matter this story is 99% filler. i can describe the whole 700+ chapters i have read in a few sentences if i ignore the filler.-personality change: early on in the very first few chapters they introduce the female lead, shes bratty, smart, spoiled, vindictive, strong and likes to smiles alot and talk and laugh at you. she is out to get the MC. later the author decides he doesn't think she should be like this so now she is. quiet, rarely smiles, cold beauty, loving. and the author makes another girl who has her original personality to replace her.-translation quality is low, you can read and understand it most of the time but there are tons and tons of errors (translator thinks Gift of gap is the saying instead of GAB) this goes on for many many chapters. tons of random words missing or the totally wrong word in its place.overall i read 700+ chapters and by read i mean i skipped 1 out of every 10 chapters (so around 70 total) because the filler was getting to me. i will never finish this i can't read more filler anymore but it was a good way to kill a week of isolation.
Honestly a decent read, mc is young and like women that's normal, there seems to be a romantic relationship but it's done in a way that kinda makes sense, and is bearable. The mc is smart ,with a calm mind as the author points out to no end. However, there are some things about the novel that is confusing. The power system/ name for this book is very concluded. I am not sure if this is the author or translators fault but the names for power levels simply don't make sense and are changed midway at points. just ignore that and you get a decent read. Logistics is also an issue, although not a big one. There is only one blatant part where it doesn't really make sense. Mc goes out hunting for beasts, and keeps there remains for money. He has one storage ring with 500ml of storage (basically nothing). Yet he is still able to effortlessly continue hunting 50-100 of critters with the sisters over the course of a few days. I understand that the system provide him an inventory with 30 slots but even with some duplicates the number seem iffy, espicially with his other stuff already in there. The sisters are around also so how is there reaction to him storing the bodies, a lot of these basic logistic problems are ignored. Last thing is just the writing style, the author does both show and tell, which means a dialogue and then a sentence or two on its explanation and reasoning, can make for a pretty dry read at times. Overall still a decent read tho, mc is not insufferable and not too kind, but he also takes care of his friends. I like the system, and the super powers it's kinda cool. The skills mc have is interesting, I just hope that the author devolupes the other skills more in the future and not just focus on the hellfire skill. Especially beast taming that one can go so far in the world. ?
it looks like it could be a great novel but as I continued I noticed a change in the fact that it seems unedited and partially machine translated and as I got some of the extra privilege chapters they ended up just being repeat chapters from around 20 chapters back and from what I've seen from comments they have no plan on changing them to the actual chapters until it hits public and it would be nice if you just got rid of those tiers so people don't spend money on it when they dont actually get what they paid for and they could be supporting a different book instead of paying for chapters that have already been released and read
I love the story but the way his family members treat him I can't accept I can't keep reading it I did like the first 100 Chapters the mom pissed me off.
Loved this novel. Things were just right with this novel on almost all fronts.Unsure why it's dropped. :(A pity!