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Clean & Neat.Impressed with your writing style.Keep it up!!!??✨✨Eagerly waiting for the next part.✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
very unique and intresting story so far. Amazing mix between fantasy and mystery elements which makes you never want to stop reading. i would highly reccomend you read it guys, and i hope it gets continued as soon as possible.
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He is adopted when he was 3 and all these year he hasn't adjusted in family you donot even remember when u are that old.Also hypno storues need to be sutle and slowly inctease your influence on them.Keeping them unaware while u have powers overtbem is the best senario.
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I read about 60 chapter, in the beginning its good, but the system explanation and the goddess part ruin it for me. The leveling part also not good, he cant get xp unless its stronger ruin it( she cant get xp from savage beast even tough she is a savage beast), also she is only savage beast but she can defeat essence lord( power scaling is off), no explanation about how normal beast advance?are they also have level?
Yours Truly Lin Fan IS BACK !!!
Mortal down before this GOD!!!
This book is created by the same author as The Strongest System
And most importantly
Yours Truly IS BACK!!!!
I honestly have a heart for this kind of stories. The first chapter was already intense, the second hits the emotion, and the story's progress is amazing. A story full of action, yes! Character depth, yes! There's a few punctuation errors, but overall, it has the potential! :)
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Simple, Generic, Quite Fast, Action-packed, and Fun to read. Give it a try before you give it up. If you think it's boring because it seems like a copy, then keep an open mind. I promise it won't disappoint.
ele parece estar de deteriorando mas por causa da linhanguen demoniaca
a dominaçao e legal mas desnecessaria para alguem tipo ele livre e curiosa pelo mundo e ainda rem que encontrar o dicipulo do samurai
Really liked this until the main guy got an 11 year old girl sidekick and immediately started thinking about taking advantage of her. But no, he decides, better wait until she's 13. Repulsive.
