ayce_capral
A pretty good story with good writing quality and the setting is also interesting. There is a system BUT thankfully there are no leveling up and exp things. it just shows him his stats and explains about them, that's it. The major turn off for most people would be that the book is mostly in first person, so some people might not like it. There are also some 4th wall breaks in MCs monologues due to this being from the first person POV. Though not too annoying for me, preceed with caution if this ruins a book for u.
The MCs personality is like Rimuru from that time I got reincarnated as a slime(the setting is pertty similar here) but he's more realistic and less optimistic about everything, and he's also brutal with his fights, actually embodying a dragon and not just a human stuck on a dragon's body. It's just at the right place, not too kind and optimitic but not too edgy and dark. He is not too smart, but not to the point of idiotic MCs, tbh it just depends on your own perspective of if you find his decisions smart or stupid.
In conclution, it's a good book. Not a trendsetting masterpiece but a good one to read and have a pleasant time. Also there are a few minor typos here and there, not too bad tho.
Enjoy if this is to your taste
system novels are quite common, but this one is definitely unique! i like yhe characters so far! keep going author nim!!!
it alway fking translator that ruined the novel.
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My honest review, you have a very good style, especially for the dialogues, they are fluid and believable (more than mine I'm afraid), good grammar and the general style is easy to read, pleasant, without long paragraphs or unnecessary descriptions.However, in the development of the story there is a lack of bait to hook the reader. Beyond the introduction of the character, the first chapters have the reader a little lost as to where the story is going.Likewise, since they are well written, I recommend that you make a prologue with the important moment or the twist that keeps the reader's attention.
To be honest ,I had high hopes according to the synopsis , that's it's going to be a good novel, but the sword qi doesn't make sense the actor is to weak despite the amount of sword qi he consumed plus he's dying .I thought he was going to improve at chap 150 but it's still the same.
Interesting
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I cant believe webnovel chose the other novel instead of this one. I hope the translator sees this and continues as it is the best of the previous batch.
Its amazing though , its really educated alots and I love the plot and twists. This book is worth recommending. You are the best author ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Hi ,
This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “The Great Worm Lich”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via [email protected]
, then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail.
It was a great pleasure to meet your story.
Sincerely
Tynan
Please please please let this novel see the light of day I beseech you...... Great fame novel really hoping for the novel to finally get fully translated not dropping it like others.
On the one hand, the story's good.
On the other hand, the translation's kinda bad. No, it's *really* bad, particularly a few chapters in where the chat comments get messed up.
If you can stomach that, though, it's a good read.
